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I Dreamed A Dream

I dreamt a dream...with eyes awake As I walked alone...round dreamer's lake I dreamt that I...was in the crowds Of white winged angels...above the clouds Watching someone...whose near their death Gasping, panting...for his last breath Watching, waiting...for his eyes to close To give him wings...when his heart slows Above the clouds...he'll soon fly free I dreamt I died...that soul was me I Dreamed A Dream Poetry Contest Sponsor Silent One 2/18/2019

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Date: 2/22/2019 10:10:00 PM
Hi Charles, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/22/2019 11:11:00 AM
I would have placed this much higher..its so very good. Congrats....BG
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Date: 2/21/2019 10:17:00 PM
Charles, let's hope it's you;congratulation on your win in the contest. Hugs eve
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Date: 2/21/2019 4:04:00 AM
- A special dream, great described - Congratulations on your winning poem, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2019 5:29:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 2/20/2019 3:11:00 PM
Nice one Charlie.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 2/20/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for the placement in your contest, SO. I really appreciate you placing me...Charlie
Date: 2/18/2019 1:36:00 PM
Wow, Charles! What a great poem! You're such an angel already that you don't have to "kick the bucket" to be one. :D FAVED
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Date: 2/18/2019 11:54:00 AM
Well written!
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Date: 2/18/2019 10:39:00 AM
My favorite...just beautiful. BG
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Date: 2/18/2019 10:35:00 AM
A sad dream..like reality often is.
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Date: 2/18/2019 9:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem Charles! Buoyant flowing masterpiece, a winner for me. My best to you in the contest, xomo!
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Date: 2/18/2019 9:18:00 AM
WoW! Charles, This was beautiful, delightful and deep. I didn't expect that ending. Good entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/18/2019 8:54:00 AM
Beautiful flow, Charles. A delightful poem.
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