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I Dreamed a Dream

You wrote the song that enchanted lyrics Composing avid tone to melody of music Attuning cleverly to tenor of fantasies Sending sensual hints to passionate wishes, As vibrant stars ceded to darker motifs. Infantile was my dream in night's reverie Cuddling arms of love, hugging intently Delighting in whispers of zealous winds Wooed by romance of affectionate feelings, Just before the misty sky began drizzling. It was really you, who trampled my sleep Just when I approached beholding your kiss. Dismantling motives of amorous destiny You disavowed with vigor allures of affinity, Flashing a warning, a storm was brewing. Rejecting my overture, you left the scene. Your seduction was real, so was your love-- Indelible prologue to tomorrow's memory, Yet truly ephemeral, as dreams tend to be. The dream I dreamed never belonged to me. February 17, 2019 Placed first:I dreamed a dream contest by Silent One Placed first: Ultimate February 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 11/27/2020 4:44:00 PM
A wonderful dream before the storm, Vijay :)
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Date: 4/17/2019 5:14:00 PM
This is truly an exquisitely woven tapestry my great friend. Your closing line so powerful! A fav, a true gem that inspires me.
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Date: 3/1/2019 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
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Date: 3/1/2019 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 3/1/2019 11:31:00 AM
Delightful, Vijay. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/22/2019 11:45:00 PM
THIS IS SUPERB, IT IS INSPIRED and though I'm willing to be wrong, its feel has a flow-tone that reveals the rawness of a pen fueled by an intimate knowledge of these emotions. As therapy, I often find rhyme seeks to heal me, and this has that authentic feel - which I think is an excellent thing! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2019 7:26:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind feedback..many many thanks, CayCay.
Date: 2/22/2019 12:00:00 PM
waiting for your new treasure, vijay...TGIF!....huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 2:49:00 PM
Coming soon, my friend.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:55:00 AM
Superb !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Akham.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning dream poem. I missed seeing this contest. At one time I wrote a lot of dream poems. So nice to read your work again. Hugs, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 2:48:00 PM
Would love to read your new post soon..many thanks SuZ.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations for your win with this stunning poem. I love it! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..so glad to read your comments..appreciate, as always.
Date: 2/22/2019 7:18:00 AM
Excellent write, Vijay... apologies for not getting to this sooner, was out of circulation for a few days... a very good poem to come back to.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:12:00 AM
Hope you had a nice break, Lawrence. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks..thank you, as always.
Date: 2/22/2019 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Truly deserving and loved it to the core :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Swetha..appreciate the kind remarks.
Date: 2/21/2019 7:58:00 PM
back with Congrats on your well deserved win, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thanks for the return visit, Andrea.
Date: 2/21/2019 6:03:00 AM
Great write, Vijay. Congratulations on your 1st place win....Charlie
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Charles.
Date: 2/21/2019 2:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/20/2019 7:15:00 PM
Perhaps this dream wasn't meant to be, but this win was. Congratulations Vijay. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:09:00 AM
This one definitely wasn't meant to be..many thanks Brandy.
Date: 2/20/2019 5:13:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Sara..much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 2/20/2019 4:32:00 PM
keep the awards coming in, vijay... sweet congrats!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Nette.
Date: 2/20/2019 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your win! Another beautiful poem my dear friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Wren.
Date: 2/20/2019 2:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 2/20/2019 2:13:00 PM
Oh Vijay, ive heard that song... how sad the ending, but is that not the case so many times... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/22/2019 8:07:00 AM
Indeed it is..many thanks SO.
Date: 2/20/2019 9:02:00 AM
Wow this is good...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2019 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 2/20/2019 8:28:00 AM
Hi Vijay, You write so amazingly I can't keep up with all your wins - congrats for ALL of them,and as for this one I think I should congratulate you in advance but all I need say - it is best for a win. My husband says jokingly to me, that he will accept my resignation from our business for it has definitely taken 2nd place to Poetry Soup! Very well done Vijay! Poetry hugs Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2019 9:38:00 AM
You have a caring and loving husband. Poetry can mesmerize..as it has, in your case. Many thanks, Jennifer.
Date: 2/19/2019 5:59:00 PM
your pen sang beautifully in this excellent write wishing you a blessed week
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2019 9:36:00 AM
Thank you Liam..much appreciate.
Date: 2/19/2019 4:44:00 PM
Just beautiful to read!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2019 9:36:00 AM
Thank you SW...appreciate your visit and comments.
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