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Date: 09/09/2023

I dream poetryPoetry Contest

Sponsored by: Ink Empress

Placed 3rd

Awake or asleep, I dream poetry. What, how and when to write? I think about it day and night. When I sit deep in my thoughts, Searching for the right words, And when I count the syllables, Using the fingers of my hands, People think that I am mad! For meals, if I fail to respond To the calls of my better half, And when I stay awake till midnight, She warns me of wasting my time. Only a poet can understand The labor of a fellow poet. The pain a poet undergoes While writing a poem is… Not less than that of a mother Giving birth to her dear child!

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Date: 9/14/2023 8:54:00 AM
Beautifully penned about the emotions a poet goes through when writing a poem.Congratulations on your placement!
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 9/14/2023 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Kenisha.
Date: 9/12/2023 12:12:00 PM
Dear Srinivas, your soulful poem describes the agony and ecstasy of the poet's labor beautifully. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 9/13/2023 1:32:00 PM
Susan, thank you for your comment.
Date: 9/12/2023 5:25:00 AM
I think many can resonate with these lines. Sometimes words just dont come easy, and that ending is very soulful . How you compared pain of a poet to a mother in labour. Creative. Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 9/13/2023 1:38:00 PM
Ink, thank you for the placement in your first contest on "Soup".

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