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I Dream Dreams

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8th September 2023 For Ink Empress' "I dream poetry" contest


I dream dreams in rhymes and verses, 
A poet's blessing in curses, 
Vague images pop up in sleep, 
Words in jumbles assault me deep;

I dream dreams in rhythmic fragments, 
Thoughts quiver without enjambments, 
Prompts come in syllables broken, 
Illusions signalled unspoken;

I dream dreams that shake me awake, 
Midnight muse greets drowsy daybreak, 
Ideas cross o'er slumberland, 
Muddled whims in poetic strand;

I dream dreams in staccato beat, 
Contemplating meter and feet, 
Nodding to nightly notions new, 
Creative fancy's fleeting view;

I dream dreams that direct my pen, 
Grasping glimpses beyond my ken, 
Composing fading melodies, 
Breathing life into memories.

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Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk

Date: 9/14/2023 9:57:00 PM

What a beautiful dream in rhythmic sync. I was whisked in this movement. Congratulations on this well win

Ink Empress

Date: 9/12/2023 2:47:00 AM

Dear joanna, this poem flows in such a mellifluous cadence, i love the way you’ve phrased lines and delivered this in such a heartfelt manner. Your choice of words and depth of it would resonate with so many Im sure. Your opening lines were truly captivating and drew me right in. And your rhymes so sublime. Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/12/2023 2:36:00 AM

The way you dream 'dreams' in such an evocative and poetic way has really made me heart awestruck.. You've carved this lines with pure brilliance that can stir anyone's soul whilst also weaving a vivid imagery with mellifluous rhymes.. "Composing fading melodies, breathing life into memories" Wow.. Heartiest congratulations to you on the well deserved win dear, I love this :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/11/2023 6:19:00 PM

Dear Joanna, I'm enthralled by your rich, rhythmic rhymes and enchanting imagery. Your poetic artistry is splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan