I Don'T Want It Anymore

I don't want it anymore


This forest of black fern, scraping thorn’d tree trunks
It all looks the same
Tearing at my flesh…ripping wounds upon my chest
Severing slowly
Pain merely a dashed figment of my stoic imagination
Sharp blades twist
Wandering for nights on end as days no longer exist
Getting nowhere fast
Frowning moss grows on the east side of sorrow
Dying north spins
As I hold in my hand this thing that still bleeds
Two parts, gaping 
Seeking the perfect hiding spot in charcoal stone ash
Shadows fade desires
This heart is of no use to me, take it, I don’t want it anymore
It is broken
Rains soften this hell as I dig deeper into the sadness
Buried in teardrop mud
And I sit, amongst bramble and thistle spun chains
Waiting for the end….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Burch Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 6:29 PM
The visual here is phenomenal!! I've been there...lol...wait...I'm still there...I think...Wonderful write my dear friend!!! Miss hearing from you...hope all is well...Great Big Hugggs!!! Deb
Downing  Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Aww, for sure the darker shades of your poetries yet so shadedly beautiful... xoxo
Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 1:54 PM
This is beautiful sadness, Chris. I really like this darker shade of your poetry repertoire. I love it as much as your uplifting, sunshine bright poems. Love and more love to you.
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 12:39 PM
- A very sad poem, Chris - Hope the sun shines on you today ... warms your heart and soul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 3:44 AM
This is very dark and sad, Chris, quite unlike you:( but it tugs at my heart, a 7:)
Devonshire Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 2:31 PM
I hope you are not really going through this, Chris. There are times in our lives when everything looks bleak. Perhaps it's time to look for a more appreciative receiver for the heart. Striking images of nature add power to this poem. Great work!
Smith Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 2:26 PM
A powerful storm of sadness...Vasoesque
Chircop Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 12:43 PM
This is is sad and dark and sad...and sad...We 've all been heartbroken at one point in time..and we might be again in the future...But Never throw away a heart that still beats and knows love...Am touched..
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Well spoken on this one Chris. Deep feelings people can reach at points in their lives. You have a way with words, to express things so well.
Roper Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 10:42 AM
I love the way you composed each sentence :-) hugs Thank you for reading my poem "Where We Meet"
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