I Don'T Love You

I do not love you and I never will 
Your face and lines read like a book from hell
You stamp out the light from the stars above
And proceed to consume the souls of love
I refuse to concede to all your whims
By grace I escaped in the knick of time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:49 PM
I am glad that you do not hold back! Welcome to Soup!
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 4:01 AM
- To be able to love ... you have to be able to love yourself, John - Our world needs a lot of love to survive - A sad poem ... strong words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:06 AM
We can relate to this, John. Narrowly escaping the clutches of a bad relationship. Well illustrated.
Mathis Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 2:07 AM
Thank you very much for your kindness. It’s an all too familiar subject I’m afraid.
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Houdini's jealous at your escape. Whew! Close call! :) gw
Mathis Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 2:05 AM
Lol he’s jealous and I’m grateful for escape! It sure was a close call lol! Thank you for your kindness!
Adams Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 8:19 PM
powerful words flow from your pen, great use of metaphors...welcome to poetry soup, hope to read more from you! :)
Mathis Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 11:36 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome! And your kind words! I truly appreciate you!
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