I Don'T Like the Night

I don’t like the night
It is deceiving

With its stars hung loose
At rising height
And its moon pale
Shaded languid white
 
I don’t like the night
It is deceiving

Provoking my emotions to play
On its strings of might
Silence in place
And solitude in sight

I don’t like the night
It is deceiving

With a sense of sorrow
And a feeling of fright
Running chills through me
In cunning delight

I don’t like the night
It is deceiving

Calling me forward
With its allure to incite
Beguiled in marvel
I stay awake tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/15/2010 7:24:00 AM
Phenomenal... love it!
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Date: 2/24/2010 12:59:00 AM
True, but I love nights as the silence starts ruling the whole place.... ;)
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Date: 8/30/2009 7:02:00 PM
Farah, I too dread the night sometimes...it comes and goes...nice! jimbo
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Date: 8/28/2009 6:04:00 AM
Soup mail.
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Date: 8/27/2009 7:50:00 AM
Night season is the best season......!nice poem all the same.
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Date: 8/9/2009 6:44:00 PM
Reminds me just a little of one of my poems, about insomnia, but I love night. And dearie, your poems, too....they are very pure. Love, Sara:)
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Date: 6/18/2009 1:11:00 AM
Awww.... take the torch with you.... good job!
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:18:00 PM
afraid of the dark are we? you need a night light. john h loving iii
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:54:00 AM
Smile~"Amazing!!!"~I read this three times; and it was just so "You"~So truly gifted "You Are, Precious & Priceless Farah Chamma!!!":):)~Smile, I have 'Always' said this about "You:" the quality and depth of "Your Soulful Writings," precedes "Your" years by far~"You Are A Very Unique & Special Young Lady!!!":):)~"Don't Worry About The Night"~"My Love & Warmth Always & Forever, To 'You & Your Loves,' Eternally, John!!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful & Bright Day Farah!!!":):) Bye ~
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Date: 6/14/2009 11:25:00 PM
You don't have to like the night, young one, I say just sleep through it! In a more serious vein, I quite understand why many, including you and me, sometimes detest the night. With the stillness and darkness that the night brings, indeed it's that part of day when all our demons seem to come out and torment us from which there is no escape except sleep, if we are lucky. Not so during daylight when our jobs make us preoccupied to momentarily forget our tribulations. Nice write, Farah. Fred
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Date: 6/14/2009 4:08:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. The imagery conveys the emotion in a creative way. Keep on writing and sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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