Advice to young people to change their thinking, if they want to succeed
I don't like your darkness suggested bpm 72 Vs 1 I'm full of energy... I got my swag on, I'm using positivity... before it's all gone Vs 2 I see you in the corner... curled up in a ball, You can't stand for nothing, if you're too afraid to fall (but, I'm not like you) Chorus I don't like the darkness... I turn on the lights, when the sun goes down You can't take the daylight... you sit inside your room- with the curtains drawn... Bridge How can you live your life? never seeing your shadow Take a deep breath, don't stay in the shallows Vs 3 You think there is no future, think, all hope is lost You don't have what it takes, to pay what it costs Vs 4 I don't like your thinking... it don't fit with me, I've been working hard, trying to change destiny (glad I'm not like you) Chorus I don't like the darkness... I turn on the lights, when the sun goes down. You can't take the daylight... you sit inside your room with the curtains drawn... Bridge How can you live your life? never seeing your shadow Take a deep breath, don't stay in the shallows Vs 5 I live in the real world... I make my own name, While you're spending all your time, playing little games Vs 6 Listen to me friend... it ain't no mystery You've got to work hard, to change your history (glad I'm not like you) Chorus I don't like the darkness... I turn on the lights, when the sun goes down You can't take the daylight... you sit inside your room with the curtains drawn... Bridge How can you live your life? never seeing your shadow Take a deep breath, don't stay in the shallows Chorus I don't like the darkness... I turn on the lights when the sun goes down. You can't take the daylight... you sit inside your room with the curtains drawn... repeat bridge and chorus and fade John Derek Hamilton November 29,2019
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