Ruth Miranda Poet Free verse

I Don'T Know You Yet

Sometimes I look for you at night,
And every now and again I wonder what you look like
or what are you doing while I write. 

Once in a while, I take long walks 
And I think of you.

Sometimes I wish I knew your name 
Or the city in which you live
Occasionally, while I look through the window,
I picture you in my mind.

Once in a while, when the rain wets my thoughts, 
I dream of you.

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Ruth Miranda November 12, 2010 at 9:04 AM Hi Dilupa...thanks for the comment...maybe you are right.....maybe it will have and end when the.."I don't know you yet" becomes... "I finally get to know you"...=)

Dilu D Wijegunasekara November 12, 2010 at 8:56 AM HI...i just feel that there is no ending in this poem,it started nicely but..the ending was not so flowing and not so strong...!

Duncan Chappell October 10, 2010 at 11:20 AM wonderful thank you [duncan]

Dr.Ram Mehta October 5, 2010 at 4:13 AM Very passionate thoughts on someone you love and yearn for- Ruth

Chelsie Hansen October 4, 2010 at 9:29 PM This poem reminds me of one of my own im working on, I guess everyone without someone wonders about the right one. I like the simplicity of your version.