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I Don'T Know You Yet

Sometimes I look for you at night, And every now and again I wonder what you look like or what are you doing while I write. Once in a while, I take long walks And I think of you. Sometimes I wish I knew your name Or the city in which you live Occasionally, while I look through the window, I picture you in my mind. Once in a while, when the rain wets my thoughts, I dream of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2010 9:04:00 AM
Hi Dilupa...thanks for the comment...maybe you are right.....maybe it will have and end when the.."I don't know you yet" becomes... "I finally get to know you"...=)
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Date: 11/12/2010 8:56:00 AM
HI...i just feel that there is no ending in this poem,it started nicely but..the ending was not so flowing and not so strong...!
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Date: 10/10/2010 11:20:00 AM
wonderful thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/5/2010 4:13:00 AM
Very passionate thoughts on someone you love and yearn for- Ruth
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:29:00 PM
This poem reminds me of one of my own im working on, I guess everyone without someone wonders about the right one. I like the simplicity of your version.
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