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I Don't Know Anymore

I was planning on living to a hundred I had enough projects to keep me busy till then but tonight I’m feeling the angst of these troubled times my priorities askew the tower trembling and crumbling I’m shaken to my core AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted on March 1, 2020

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Date: 3/8/2020 5:08:00 AM
"My priorities askew, the tower trembling and crumbling" - wow. This poem shakes my core a bit as I read.
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Date: 3/8/2020 6:15:00 AM
Amazing what a good night's sleep will do. My batteries are recharged. So I'm ready to go go go.
Date: 3/2/2020 7:18:00 PM
don't worry about the time you have left to you. Think about living and loving and filling the time you have left and that time will be very happy for you.
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Date: 3/3/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thanks for the pep talk, Timothy.
Date: 3/2/2020 6:10:00 PM
And yet -- Do you know any less?! … There's a clever saying in Yiddish: 'A mensch tracht, un Got lacht.' / A man makes plans, and God laughs. …. And so it goes, sometimes. Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 3/2/2020 7:00:00 PM
That's right, Gershon. We can't take anything for granted other than just that: we can't take anything for granted.
Date: 3/2/2020 4:27:00 PM
i think we all feel that way from time to time, line, but we can't all express it quite so well...
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Date: 3/2/2020 7:01:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and compliment, Ilene.
Date: 3/2/2020 1:22:00 PM
I understand what you mean Line, but hey. when the sun comes out it changes everything. I am off to London tomorrow for an evening of operatic arias, which I know will truly lift my soul, and hopefully protect me from these nasty germs that they say are all around us! Keep smiling dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 3/2/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank you, Ann. Enjoy! All the best to you.
Date: 3/2/2020 5:29:00 AM
Never give up- keep going Line-everything will be fine, Julie
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Date: 3/2/2020 8:38:00 AM
Yes, when we lose perspective, it's important to get back on the wagon. Thanks, Julie.
Date: 3/2/2020 12:19:00 AM
Keep your chin up. It always works out:)
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Date: 3/2/2020 12:53:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Daniel.

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