I Don'T Feel Loved

I don't feel loved
I feel like I'm dying
All I want is someone to be there
Someone to count on
I need you
Will you be there for me?
Or will you go away like most of the people in my life?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 20, 2013 at 9:45 AM
short but very deep and emotional. the pain is clearly felt in each line. nice job
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