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I Don't Dare

Night hours linger breathless I hold your hand together wait for the pain to subside I don’t dare fall asleep wrapping gently my arms around you to keep watch all night long kissing your ear releasing whispers of I love you I don’t dare fall asleep AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on March 1, 2019

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Date: 3/5/2019 6:42:00 PM
So touching to me. Been there. Thank you for reminded me of the love.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for your touching comment, Timothy.
Date: 3/2/2019 4:26:00 AM
Beautifully rendered, and thoughtfully penned, my friend.
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Date: 3/2/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and compliment, Caren.
Date: 3/1/2019 4:17:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Line. You are one dedicated lover and poet. FAVED.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely visit and most appreciated compliment.
Date: 3/1/2019 4:11:00 PM
Line, this leaves the door open for so many interpretations and emotions....Nicely done....
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 4:31:00 PM
This is a most marvelous comment that I love to hear.

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