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I Do Thee Wed

Two Sweeties they wed on a beach, vowed their love with nary a preach. Though joined once before, they had love left galore, and reclaimed their love each to each. Barefoot they both stood on the sand reclaiming their lives hand in hand smiles wreathed with graces two handsome faces blessed from on High ain’t love grand. ps__JT76896.jpg Poet: D. Guzzi

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Cherie Durbin

Date: 4/13/2011 4:39:00 AM

I love a happy ending, Debbie!

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/12/2011 4:58:00 AM

Many congrats Debbie on notching up big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/11/2011 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/11/2011 6:30:00 AM

beautiful Debbie, congrats. Harry

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/11/2011 5:21:00 AM

Flows nicely. Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/11/2011 4:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/10/2011 11:07:00 PM

Oooh so beautiful Deb. many congrats.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/10/2011 8:05:00 PM

a scene-stealer, yeoww lights! … my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2011 2:41:00 PM

oh, i love that part Ain't love grand? YOu fit it so nicely into the second limerick. Good ones, DEB, congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/10/2011 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Debbie

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/10/2011 11:21:00 AM

Beautiful entry Debbie.Congratulations on your win in this contest.Love, Gautami

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/10/2011 11:16:00 AM

It sure is grand indeed and so is this limerick-- am feeling that rhythm ;) & wow, you honestly think that? I am happy that I am finally "getting" some of that meter-- yay! Thank you & Congrats on your win :) hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 4/10/2011 11:14:00 AM

Many congratulations, Debbie : ) Jack

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/10/2011 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie on your placement today.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2011 8:07:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your success in my contest with this unique write luv.. appreciate your constant support always and your friendship too..

James Foulk

Date: 4/5/2011 9:18:00 AM

a very sweet piece you wrote. thank you for reading my the cellar door and for your comment.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2011 2:41:00 PM

I guess love is grand, Deb. Been so long I have forgotten. LOL Beach weddings are fun to attend and we have lots of them here. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2011 5:08:00 PM

thankxx for supporting my current contest B=Debbie.. good luck luv.. reading fully as judging time draws closer ..happy weekend..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2011 10:26:00 PM

It's a sugar sweet limerick for the sweetheart! She is sure to eat it up, Debs!! (great form too!)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/17/2011 4:38:00 PM

You read the picture correctly and rendered it more correctly, Debbie

Rick Parise

Date: 3/17/2011 4:00:00 PM

Nice Write~Enjoyed//////////I hate to break the news Miss Guzzi.............but.........................Yes you....you.........are the only one who forgot...............................my Birthday//// I cry a tear of pain~;-@ ouch...

Timothy Brumley

Date: 3/17/2011 3:38:00 PM

Both barefoot and handsome huh, hmmmm. Afraid to touch that one:) I entered one of my poems in your contest, I don't know if its what you were looking for but you got it anyway!