Debbie Guzzi Poet Limerick

I Do Thee Wed

Two Sweeties they wed on a beach,
vowed their love with nary a preach.
Though joined once before,
they had love left galore,
and reclaimed their love each to each.

Barefoot they both stood on the sand
reclaiming their lives hand in hand
smiles wreathed with graces
two handsome faces
blessed from on High ain’t love grand.

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Poet: D. Guzzi

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Cherie Durbin April 13, 2011 at 4:39 AM I love a happy ending, Debbie!

Dr Hitendra Mehta April 12, 2011 at 4:58 AM Many congrats Debbie on notching up big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Caryl Muzzey April 11, 2011 at 9:28 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Harry Horsman April 11, 2011 at 6:30 AM beautiful Debbie, congrats. Harry

Black Eyed Susan April 11, 2011 at 5:21 AM Flows nicely. Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 11, 2011 at 4:50 AM Congratulations on your win Debbie in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan April 10, 2011 at 11:07 PM Oooh so beautiful Deb. many congrats.

Nette Onclaud April 10, 2011 at 8:05 PM a scene-stealer, yeoww lights! … my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2011 at 2:41 PM oh, i love that part Ain't love grand? YOu fit it so nicely into the second limerick. Good ones, DEB, congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 10, 2011 at 1:34 PM Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Debbie

Gautami Phookan April 10, 2011 at 11:21 AM Beautiful entry Debbie.Congratulations on your win in this contest.Love, Gautami

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 10, 2011 at 11:16 AM It sure is grand indeed and so is this limerick-- am feeling that rhythm ;) & wow, you honestly think that? I am happy that I am finally "getting" some of that meter-- yay! Thank you & Congrats on your win :) hugs

Jack Horne April 10, 2011 at 11:14 AM Many congratulations, Debbie : ) Jack

Joe Maverick April 10, 2011 at 10:38 AM Congratulations Debbie on your placement today.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 10, 2011 at 8:07 AM Congrats Debbie on your success in my contest with this unique write luv.. appreciate your constant support always and your friendship too..

James Foulk April 5, 2011 at 9:18 AM a very sweet piece you wrote. thank you for reading my the cellar door and for your comment.

Carolyn Devonshire March 20, 2011 at 2:41 PM I guess love is grand, Deb. Been so long I have forgotten. LOL Beach weddings are fun to attend and we have lots of them here. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 18, 2011 at 5:08 PM thankxx for supporting my current contest B=Debbie.. good luck luv.. reading fully as judging time draws closer ..happy weekend..

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2011 at 10:26 PM It's a sugar sweet limerick for the sweetheart! She is sure to eat it up, Debs!! (great form too!)

Dr.Ram Mehta March 17, 2011 at 4:38 PM You read the picture correctly and rendered it more correctly, Debbie

Timothy Brumley March 17, 2011 at 3:38 PM Both barefoot and handsome huh, hmmmm. Afraid to touch that one:) I entered one of my poems in your contest, I don't know if its what you were looking for but you got it anyway!