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I Do Not Understand Your Mind

I do not understand your mind But I have one too Maybe someday you will find What it’s like living with you I cannot read your thoughts and fears But heck, I’ve got em’ too Maybe someday you’ll see the tears That have only been shed for you I have no desire to know your heart Until you see me too And when you see the rolling death cart You’ll find the dead body’s you I will not understand your death Because I’m dying too Maybe someday in another life We’ll all go looking for you Push the cart away, my friend And see me eye to eye And there you’ll find a needle to mend The tears when I die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/10/2017 7:33:00 AM
This is breathtaking. Wonderful piece.
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Date: 6/9/2017 9:58:00 AM
Nice to see this piece making its way to the home page. Nice write, tugs at the heart.
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Date: 6/8/2017 1:39:00 AM
I felt the sadness of soul. I hope you find yourself revolving and mending your brokenness.
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Date: 5/8/2014 2:01:00 AM
Laura, this is very sad. I, however, also adore its composition. It's like a defiant stance you take against somebody making you feel unimportant.
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Date: 8/30/2012 9:53:00 PM
Oh, Here is another one I missed? I can feel it in my heart. Sad...But a very nice write. :o)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/31/2012 6:16:00 PM
Thanks:) Glad you can endure the sadness with a smile.
Date: 11/2/2011 10:32:00 PM
Dear Laura, Your last stanza is Awesome I see YOU changed the "I don't Know Form" Thank-YOU For YOUR Inspiring Gracious Comments with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:19:00 AM
HOLY JESUS!!!!!!!! HOW FREAKIN' AWESOME IS THIS POEM!...well...it's awesome...I love your style - Kyle
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:04:00 AM
i can't understand why this wonderful thought came and filled this page with words of hearts,,, welcome....junjun...great!
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Date: 5/30/2011 7:41:00 PM
love ya
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