I Do Not Cower

Gray covered skies, tints of light
Waiting, trying, to do what is right
A storm of thoughts in my mind
Gets even worse with what I find

There’s a stagnant air outside
I thought I heard an angel that cried
There’s a stillness around today
That indicates more is on the way

Minutes pass slowly, birds chirping count
Many things suddenly mount
Finding answers, that were not known
Flying places, I haven’t flown

Gray covered skies, tints of light
Remain the same each hour
I look at the color of the flower,
Blooming through a rain shower
	   -  I do not cower  -

Heidi Sands

6/1/22
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June 8, 2022 at 3:50 PM
Well written. I enjoyed your colorful imagery. Hugs. Ann
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June 9, 2022 at 6:48 AM
Thank you very much Ann :)
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June 2, 2022 at 8:05 PM
Your 'storms of thought' come to you seemingly so naturally, Heidi. For others like me, they are known as 'brainstorms,' requiring tons of exertion. ~ Whew, Gershon '
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June 3, 2022 at 5:45 AM
Thank you Gershon :)
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June 2, 2022 at 1:31 AM
Keep putting to paper those thoughts in your head Heidi, amazing things you have in there.
Sands Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 4:33 AM
That is a very kind thing to say Harry. Thank you :)
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June 1, 2022 at 1:48 PM
Nature is indeed a soul reflection. What mankind holds on the inside manifests in the outside world of material substance. Our earth is a reflection of ourselves. "Gray covered skies, tints of light Remain the same each hour I look at the color of the flower, Blooming through a rain shower - I do not cower -" Splendid poetry and truth!
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June 1, 2022 at 4:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe. I appreciate your kind feedback :)
Pandit Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Good to be around nature to observe the changes---as you so eloquently depict in this poem, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 3:59 PM
Yes it is. Thank you, my friend :)
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June 1, 2022 at 11:44 AM
Hello Heidi, this is beautifully done. Flowers need rain. Hugs.
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June 1, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Hello Heidi, Thank you I am having a nice afternoon. Hugs.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 11:57 AM
Thank you Darlene. Yes they do. I hope you are having a nice afternoon :)
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June 1, 2022 at 8:26 AM
A remarkable poem that portrays both the inner and outer world. Excellently done, my dearest friend, Heidi. Be blessed!
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios. Blessings :)
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June 1, 2022 at 7:56 AM
A fine, well-written poem, Heidi. I couldn't agree more with the sentiments expressed. Good writing!
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Thank you very much Milton :)
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