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I Do Not Cower

Gray covered skies, tints of light Waiting, trying, to do what is right A storm of thoughts in my mind Gets even worse with what I find There’s a stagnant air outside I thought I heard an angel that cried There’s a stillness around today That indicates more is on the way Minutes pass slowly, birds chirping count Many things suddenly mount Finding answers, that were not known Flying places, I haven’t flown Gray covered skies, tints of light Remain the same each hour I look at the color of the flower, Blooming through a rain shower - I do not cower - Heidi Sands 6/1/22

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Date: 6/8/2022 3:50:00 PM
Well written. I enjoyed your colorful imagery. Hugs. Ann
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2022 6:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Ann :)
Date: 6/2/2022 8:05:00 PM
Your 'storms of thought' come to you seemingly so naturally, Heidi. For others like me, they are known as 'brainstorms,' requiring tons of exertion. ~ Whew, Gershon '
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/3/2022 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Gershon :)
Date: 6/2/2022 1:31:00 AM
Keep putting to paper those thoughts in your head Heidi, amazing things you have in there.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/2/2022 4:33:00 AM
That is a very kind thing to say Harry. Thank you :)
Date: 6/1/2022 1:48:00 PM
Nature is indeed a soul reflection. What mankind holds on the inside manifests in the outside world of material substance. Our earth is a reflection of ourselves. "Gray covered skies, tints of light Remain the same each hour I look at the color of the flower, Blooming through a rain shower - I do not cower -" Splendid poetry and truth!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/1/2022 4:00:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe. I appreciate your kind feedback :)
Date: 6/1/2022 12:46:00 PM
Good to be around nature to observe the changes---as you so eloquently depict in this poem, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/1/2022 3:59:00 PM
Yes it is. Thank you, my friend :)
Date: 6/1/2022 11:44:00 AM
Hello Heidi, this is beautifully done. Flowers need rain. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2022 12:12:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Thank you I am having a nice afternoon. Hugs.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/1/2022 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Darlene. Yes they do. I hope you are having a nice afternoon :)
Date: 6/1/2022 8:26:00 AM
A remarkable poem that portrays both the inner and outer world. Excellently done, my dearest friend, Heidi. Be blessed!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/1/2022 10:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios. Blessings :)
Date: 6/1/2022 7:56:00 AM
A fine, well-written poem, Heidi. I couldn't agree more with the sentiments expressed. Good writing!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/1/2022 10:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Milton :)

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