I Do

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The maiden's spinneret
            rapidly
         cocooned i

  leaving the spiracle
       for the words

             I do

lovefree verse

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 26, 2009 at 4:36 AM

I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today James. I thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

August 25, 2009 at 6:23 PM

magical, lyrical and amazingly original! James!

Charmaine Chircop

August 25, 2009 at 2:03 PM

this is a fav James--your maidens spinneret cocoones the you,leaving the spiracle from where you breath thy words in verses--- i love the way you write.............excellent--and you re all in my prayers--charma

Carolyn Devonshire

August 25, 2009 at 12:12 PM

BTW, I will be in Jersey for a while, but will be checking my email and visiting the Soup from time to time. Wish there were a way we could get together, but I will be busy and I know you have plans with Noah. Please give him a hug for me!