Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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FEB 5, 2025    11.30PM

I Dived Into The Cauldron Of Magic Potion

I dived into the cauldron of magic potion
And saw my prince charming’s clear reflection
With bouquet of roses and a big box of chocolate
All for me on this coming Valentine’s date.

My heart was pounding in admiration and joy
He was so handsome, fair and tall. Oh, boy!
As I swam deeper, down into its bottom room
He became a wizard and I, a witch with a broom.

I dived into the cauldron of magic potion
And saw my prince charming’s magical reaction
Hats off before me to offer all his lovely gifts
And went out with me and my broom as our lift.

My heart was rejoicing with great happiness
For celebrating hearts’ day amidst singleness
This year’s Valentines Day has given me a great treat
A sweetheart in the eyes of people I’m going to meet.

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Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:01 PM I dived into the cauldron of magic potion and... Contest Judged: 3/7/2025 12:53:00 AM Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Place 4 (up to 4th & HM multi-w) Contest Judged: 2/8/2025 5:01:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand Place:HM (muti 1,2,3,4,5,89,10 &HM)

Christuraj Alex March 7, 2025 at 10:11 PM "A sweetheart in the eyes of people I’m going to meet." - Beautifully written. Congratulations! Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:07 AM Oh, thank you so much my dear poet friend Christuraj for reading my poem, your encouraging words and congratulatory greetings! God bless you always and your writings. I'll come visit your page later/soon ok. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith February 6, 2025 at 1:27 PM What a creative/fun write you have here. Great Pictures... "Good Luck" Hope you are OK. Hugs... Have a fun day as you write away.................. Len Gasun February 7, 2025 at 7:16 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, inspiring words and best wishes my dear poet friend Paula. With God's mercy I'm fine dear despite my load of work and allergy. I'm suffering again from sorethroat but, hopefully, it'll heal. Thank you so miuch for your sweet thoughts and visit. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

thriveni c mysore February 6, 2025 at 2:42 AM magical write, beautiful dear poet. Best wishes dear friend. I'll be back to congratulate. Len Gasun February 7, 2025 at 6:01 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and best wishes my dear poet friend. Best wishes as well to you in all the contests that you're joining here. Sorry for the late reply coz I'm still busy at school up to this moment. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2025 at 11:12 AM - All this magic for you on this upcoming Valentine's Day, Len ... it would be a wonderful day ... I enjoy this with a smile, my friend - Best wishes in the contest and on Valentine's Day :) - hugs Len Gasun February 5, 2025 at 8:05 PM Thank you my dearest poet friend Anne-lise. Let's cross our fingers, ha ha. Best wishes to you too my dearest friend. God bless you always and your writings. Advance Happy Valentines! Hugs

CayCay Godwin February 5, 2025 at 9:25 AM I enjoyed your creative write - so upbeat and imaginative. CayCay Len Gasun February 5, 2025 at 9:37 AM Dear poet friend Caycay. I'm so glad to see you back. Thank you so much for your lovely visit, reading my poem and your uplifting words. So glad you enjoyed it. I tried this prompt and as my fingers stroke the keyboard, the out put was this. Can't wait to read from you, too but too late here so I'll visit you tomorrow, promise ok & so with the others. God bless you always and your poetry. Miss u. Many hugs fr me.