Anwar Hussain Poet Prose Poetry

I Disappear

wake up to serendipity
ignorant and unknown
shaken and not stirred
blond can be bond

Reality, metaphor and cliche
cheesy juvenile decay
Love, care and hate
past the use by date

of fights and torment
and well deserved lament
salute to the solitary reaper
with Metallica... I disappear

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Amanda Governale January 19, 2010 at 2:59 PM I loved ready this poem. Congrats! and again i just really loved this poem. - AmandaLG*

Carol Sunshine Brown December 22, 2009 at 3:17 PM Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Anwar. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart December 21, 2009 at 9:10 AM Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser December 20, 2009 at 10:22 AM Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

John Freeman November 18, 2009 at 6:32 PM Anwar congratulations on your featured poem this week. Sincerely, Moses

Janette Fisher November 18, 2009 at 11:34 AM Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette

Iolanda Scripca November 17, 2009 at 7:57 PM Congratulations, Anwar, on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

P Sheart November 16, 2009 at 11:39 AM Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty

James Fraser November 16, 2009 at 10:43 AM Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James

Anwar Hussain November 16, 2009 at 5:56 AM Thank you folks for the appreciation, means a lot.

Carol Sunshine Brown November 16, 2009 at 5:33 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

November 15, 2009 at 6:45 PM There is a rhythm to this poem that works well in conveying your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Anwar Hussain August 16, 2009 at 6:43 PM Thanks for your comments guys...

Emily Kroeger August 16, 2009 at 11:12 AM Wow this is an awesome poem.

Sara Kendrick August 16, 2009 at 11:11 AM Interesting work. Sara