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I Disappear

wake up to serendipity ignorant and unknown shaken and not stirred blond can be bond Reality, metaphor and cliche cheesy juvenile decay Love, care and hate past the use by date of fights and torment and well deserved lament salute to the solitary reaper with Metallica... I disappear

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Amanda Governale

Date: 1/19/2010 2:59:00 PM

I loved ready this poem. Congrats! and again i just really loved this poem. - AmandaLG*

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2009 3:17:00 PM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Anwar. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:10:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 10:22:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

John Freeman

Date: 11/18/2009 6:32:00 PM

Anwar congratulations on your featured poem this week. Sincerely, Moses

Janette Fisher

Date: 11/18/2009 11:34:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/17/2009 7:57:00 PM

Congratulations, Anwar, on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

P Sheart

Date: 11/16/2009 11:39:00 AM

Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 11/16/2009 10:43:00 AM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James

Anwar Hussain

Date: 11/16/2009 5:56:00 AM

Thank you folks for the appreciation, means a lot.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2009 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Date: 11/15/2009 6:45:00 PM

There is a rhythm to this poem that works well in conveying your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Anwar Hussain

Date: 8/16/2009 6:43:00 PM

Thanks for your comments guys...

Emily Kroeger

Date: 8/16/2009 11:12:00 AM

Wow this is an awesome poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2009 11:11:00 AM

Interesting work. Sara