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It stimulated me like a sublime tea, brewed from a transcendent plant. I felt renewed, suddenly invigorated. My weary heart was addressed. You brought me back to what all men seek when love equals warm milk upon the babies cheek. Like whistling an unfamiliar tune, in a dark cavern, I searched for equilibrium. Your verse found way into a deep chasm of my accepting mind. You found your way inside and I gratefully obliged. With honest clarity, you lifted the veil. Revealing your true, radiant self. All pretense had melted. I could not blind my eyes to your words, as I saw for the first time, beauty and truth combine.

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Date: 5/23/2011 7:36:00 PM
Hello Michael, Have you found someone that ignite your soul and mind that catapulted you to be poetic? I see that in your poem and I love it. Nice read for me this afternoon Thanks for your comment on my poem. See you in poetry soup. Dalila
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Date: 5/23/2011 8:50:00 AM
Wow Michael, you blow my mind. You're really good, honestly. Wowa!! Luv Gail
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:34:00 AM
as your poem stated, so very true poetry can stimuate others to write. very well penned
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:19:00 PM
Yes, Only a gifted writer can write such a beautiful love poem. Incredible love for a person so beautifully and gracefully depicted ....This is a brilliant work ! I am ur biggest fan ...
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:37:00 AM
I love this so sweet ....Smile's :@)
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