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As you may have guessed, yes this is what today you would call a trilogy. However this is another rare form of poetry called "Progressive massage a trois" This form is attributed to the Marquis de Sade a French aristocrat who was a philosopher, a writer, poet, revolutionary, who wrote under his name and others. He was known also for his libertine sexual views.

 

The form is 3 poems, that progress from one concept to the next all with a common theme, for example,  short/medium/long or nature/science/life or witty/serious/contemplative and so on. The idea is you take a small idea and progress it in the direction you wish. Although no one knows if it was the Marquis de Sade, it is attributed to him more because it was a used form during his time, now weather he used this form under his own name or another, I leave that up to you and history!

 

I Died in Her Arms Tonight

I DIed in Her Arm

I Died in Her Teardrops

I Died In Her Teardrops

The Iraqi desert was blowing wind
The bullet tore into my heart
My Commander, she had but one arm
She pulled me to the ground
Holding me tight she saw
I would not make the night
So she did what any lover would
She held me tight
Whispered, "soldier I am with you till the end"
My last thought
Was I died in her arm
As her tears drops mixed with mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 8/1/2015 9:16:00 AM
This gave me goosebumps as I was reading it! Brilliant!!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/5/2015 1:18:00 AM
Thanks, was part of a trilogy from humorous to serious
Date: 6/5/2015 1:41:00 PM
Tender and sorrowful. Creative and original these three poems of yours. Enjoyed them very much : )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/12/2015 11:21:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia!!
Date: 6/4/2015 1:33:00 AM
touching deep beautiful pen arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:44:00 PM
Thanks liam, hope all is well with you!
Date: 6/3/2015 5:14:00 PM
wow, you were in a crazy mood doing these died in her arms poems!!! This one was very unique because it was teardrops. I enjoyed all three, Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:43:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!!!! hugs!
Date: 6/3/2015 7:34:00 AM
A very beautiful heartbreaking poem this is my dear friend, Arthur. I love it. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your lovely visit on my work. love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:43:00 PM
Thank you Leonora
Date: 6/2/2015 2:50:00 PM
compelling piece, arthur.. you stirred my senses with this intriguing, disturbing work.. and a beauty at that!.. huggs
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Date: 6/2/2015 9:34:00 AM
So sad and tragic in a most romantic way..Brilliantly penned !!
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Date: 6/2/2015 8:36:00 AM
Wow Arthur this is stunning,,,not only is it amazing poetry,,,but if time you can check out my 'Urban Battlefield' you will see a similar theme i once wrote, way back
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:43:00 PM
that I will do for sure Harry,thanks!!!!
Date: 6/2/2015 7:12:00 AM
Each of your writes are stand alone yet come together in an emotional trio. As always Arthur, your uniqueness takes the reader higher, and I am constantly climbing on a ladder to keep up. Wonderful collection my wise worded friend.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:42:00 PM
Well in this case Miss Angel, maybe this one does, but the other two where like the entrees to the main course here! Thanks!!! xxxx
Date: 6/2/2015 5:38:00 AM
I read your other two and love the unexpected...but this third one stole my heart...all true all possible yet none so touching...cheers H.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Huberta, very nice of you!
Date: 6/2/2015 1:19:00 AM
I read the other 2 poems Arthur - this is so so moving and sadly so true - excellent pen i am in awe of your creativity my friend:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx faves
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:38:00 PM
Thanks Jan, so are so sweet to say so! xxxxxx
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