I Died In Her Arms Tonight

I fell off a boat An Octopus caught me in her arms She took me for dinner

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2015 10:04:00 PM

arthur, I keep going down your list of poems and can't seem to click on one I have not seen. Let me go down a bit farther!!! That question you just asked me, I ask myself the same thing all the time. hahaha

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/20/2015 9:08:00 AM

There seems to be a whole lot of dieing going on. To bad for you it wasn't dieting for her!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/20/2015 11:04:00 AM

LOL well there is also re-birth if you check the Blogs!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/5/2015 1:26:00 PM

Ha, ha....I wasn't expecting this after seeing your title, awesome! Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/20/2015 11:04:00 AM

Thanks Cecilia, is fun to do the unexpected!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/4/2015 9:22:00 AM

Ha, ha, a calamari coma !

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:33:00 PM

It was a calamarity for sure!!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2015 5:11:00 PM

haha. LOVE it.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:33:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/2/2015 1:12:00 AM

The title grabbed me - the poem made me giggle - awaiting part 2 with baited breath lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/2/2015 8:29:00 PM

Thanks Jan Hugs!!!

Judy Konos

Date: 6/1/2015 8:30:00 PM

A fine piece of Literature indeed! GREAT BIG 7...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/1/2015 8:36:00 PM

Its only part 1 of 3, when you read all 3, I am sure you will be truly amazed!!!!