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I Died

I died the day we said goodbye can't shut the sun by shutting the eyes will love you past the end of times Second Place Winner-Line Gauthier-Bite Size Contest No 106-3/31/25

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/31/2025 10:55:00 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/31/2025 9:29:00 PM

Now these are well weighed words dear poet. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/13/2023 7:58:00 AM

The emotional power of your pen shines in your poignant verse, Frances. The embrace of eternal love expressed with succinct beauty. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Gary Radice

Date: 5/9/2023 4:17:00 AM

This is both brilliant and poignant Frances. Three short lines that drip with so much human emotion. I love it. Cheers - Gary