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I Died

I died the day we said goodbye
can't shut the sun by shutting the eyes
will love you past the end of times

Second Place Winner-Line Gauthier-Bite Size Contest No 106-3/31/25

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Beata Agustin

March 31, 2025 at 10:55 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

thriveni c mysore

March 31, 2025 at 9:29 PM

Now these are well weighed words dear poet. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Susan Ashley

May 13, 2023 at 7:58 AM

The emotional power of your pen shines in your poignant verse, Frances. The embrace of eternal love expressed with succinct beauty. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan