I Die

When I die 
my spirit will fade
will I loose you 
deep In the haze 
darkness surrounds
searching I go
never to find 
may never know
wander all days
yet still I try
never be found
down in a maze
in darkness I go
no end of days
never a glow
never a blaze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/17/2016 8:05:00 PM
Hi Dean, just wanted to say you don't have to die to arrive in this place. You might identify with my most recent piece, Dear Id. Really makes me wonder if I'm crazy or awake?!?
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 2/8/2016 8:38:00 AM
I understand how you feel. There are many of us that feel that way. Having any sort of expectations on this site is a mistake. You can't afford to care if people like your work here, some will, some won't. You just have to put your work out there because because you enjoy doing it. The rest is just the rest of it all. Say what you need to say, share what you choose to share, that's it, no expectations.
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Dean Mobley
Date: 2/7/2016 11:21:00 PM
Thank you. Tell me, I need the truth. I blame some of my poems are amazingly good. But I just cat tell. I feel like a primitive beginner. They TEAD like beautiful art....what are they..???
Date: 1/11/2016 5:01:00 AM
This is real good stuff. Why no comments?
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