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I didn't Notice

I didn't notice how fast time was going— all the commotion, it's quite the distraction. This perpetual motion, lost in a sea of consumption, all for social devotion. Lacking what we left behind, now chasing dimes with our time. Is it wrong to numb with lights and rums? Moments between moments are what we miss— something as a kid I didn't notice.

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Philip Abayomi Olorunfemi

Date: 11/30/2024 7:23:00 AM

Lovely!

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/21/2024 3:10:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.