Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

I Didn'T Love You Anyway

I know that you live in a world of your own
Fantasy and dreamland really should be your home
You’ve taken everything away from me
But I’ve cut the ties, now I am free

So you’ve been caught with your trousers down
You were wearing a grin – now your wearing a frown
Well boy I’ve only got one thing to say
I never really loved you anyway!

Jan Allison
23rd July 2014

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Casarah Nance July 24, 2014 at 7:49 PM I like it, very empowering, way to shrug off an *hole :) Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 2:00 AM LOL Thanks for the comment Casarah:-) Hugs jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop July 23, 2014 at 3:58 PM Powerful!!!I'm going to favour this.Ow yeah it ends so well believing in the dignity of oneself..You roar so fine girl. Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 4:36 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Charmaine:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos July 23, 2014 at 9:32 AM Bravo, Jan. This is a powerful "coming to grips with and letting go" piece! Love it! Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 11:06 AM Thanks for the comment Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

J. R. Corbin July 23, 2014 at 9:09 AM Excellent! Sounds like song lyrics. I enjoyed this, and thank you for posting it. Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 11:05 AM Thanks for the lovely comment JR maybe it will be expanded into a lyric one day. Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith July 23, 2014 at 8:31 AM Now that you're available, would you like to take a walk on the beach? ...fabulous write Jan...love it...hugs Tim Charmaine Chircop July 23, 2014 at 3:56 PM : ) Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 11:05 AM Cheers for the lovely comment Tim.... If I were free I'd take you up on the offer!:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian July 23, 2014 at 6:11 AM JAN!!!!!!!!! This is one of your absolute best..if not THE best! Every single line...a powder keg about to go off. I'm proud of you! Hugs Eileen Manassian July 23, 2014 at 7:13 AM I do care for you, Sweetie! Never forget that. Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 6:15 AM Wow Eileen that is praise indeed you have made my day! Hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 23, 2014 at 5:58 AM Wow the freedom of spirit in the end,, lovely write Jan //upma// Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 6:00 AM Thanks Dr Sharma for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx

Saba Khan July 23, 2014 at 5:27 AM Good one Jan , Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 5:29 AM Thanks Saba. Eye love the new avatar!!!! Hugs jan xxxx

Robert Nehls July 23, 2014 at 5:15 AM Now that's the way to tell a guy that's been unfaithful, Jan. Let him know that it doesn't matter because there was nothing there any way. Gets the point across in a hurry. Well written, my friend.... Robert. Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 5:21 AM Thankfully its not a true experience in my life Robert. Thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xxx

Jeremy Street July 23, 2014 at 5:06 AM Powerful Girl! I Dig It....KLove * Jan Allison July 23, 2014 at 5:12 AM Cheer for the comment Jeremy. Hugs Jan xx