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I Didn'T Love You Anyway

I know that you live in a world of your own Fantasy and dreamland really should be your home You’ve taken everything away from me But I’ve cut the ties, now I am free So you’ve been caught with your trousers down You were wearing a grin – now your wearing a frown Well boy I’ve only got one thing to say I never really loved you anyway! Jan Allison 23rd July 2014

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/24/2014 7:49:00 PM

I like it, very empowering, way to shrug off an *hole :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2014 2:00:00 AM

LOL Thanks for the comment Casarah:-) Hugs jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/23/2014 3:58:00 PM

Powerful!!!I'm going to favour this.Ow yeah it ends so well believing in the dignity of oneself..You roar so fine girl.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 4:36:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Charmaine:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/23/2014 9:32:00 AM

Bravo, Jan. This is a powerful "coming to grips with and letting go" piece! Love it!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 11:06:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 7/23/2014 9:09:00 AM

Excellent! Sounds like song lyrics. I enjoyed this, and thank you for posting it.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 11:05:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment JR maybe it will be expanded into a lyric one day. Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/23/2014 8:31:00 AM

Now that you're available, would you like to take a walk on the beach? ...fabulous write Jan...love it...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/23/2014 3:56:00 PM

: )

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 11:05:00 AM

Cheers for the lovely comment Tim.... If I were free I'd take you up on the offer!:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/23/2014 6:11:00 AM

JAN!!!!!!!!! This is one of your absolute best..if not THE best! Every single line...a powder keg about to go off. I'm proud of you! Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/23/2014 7:13:00 AM

I do care for you, Sweetie! Never forget that.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 6:15:00 AM

Wow Eileen that is praise indeed you have made my day! Hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/23/2014 5:58:00 AM

Wow the freedom of spirit in the end,, lovely write Jan //upma//

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 6:00:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx

Saba Khan

Date: 7/23/2014 5:27:00 AM

Good one Jan ,

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 5:29:00 AM

Thanks Saba. Eye love the new avatar!!!! Hugs jan xxxx

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/23/2014 5:15:00 AM

Now that's the way to tell a guy that's been unfaithful, Jan. Let him know that it doesn't matter because there was nothing there any way. Gets the point across in a hurry. Well written, my friend.... Robert.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 5:21:00 AM

Thankfully its not a true experience in my life Robert. Thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xxx

Jeremy Street

Date: 7/23/2014 5:06:00 AM

Powerful Girl! I Dig It....KLove *

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 5:12:00 AM

Cheer for the comment Jeremy. Hugs Jan xx