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I didn't do it

“Who broke my heart, eh?”
The question which I address
to the sly cupid.
He hides hands behind his back,
smiling: “I didn’t do it.”


02.06.2019
Premiere Contest No 200,Haiku(Traditional Or Otherwise)Or Tanka(Inc Cinqku,Cinquain Or Lanterne Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 7/9/2019 1:46:00 PM
aha, very clever
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Date: 6/12/2019 6:59:00 PM
this is SO cute!
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Date: 6/9/2019 2:57:00 AM
This one is a winner, Kurt. Made me smile.
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Date: 6/6/2019 8:52:00 PM
A clever tanka Kurt. Best wishes for a win. These are difficult for me to write. : )
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Date: 6/6/2019 9:56:00 AM
Heartbreak from arrows loosed in the wind. Cast into eternity, that void in which love sadly ends.. Superb Tanka my great friend, god luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/5/2019 2:40:00 PM
Dear Kurt, well penned... i say : Cunning as he alone (learned from the devil) Cupid denies everything ... but who shot the arrows? salute alkas
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:00:00 PM
A clever Tanka, Kurt, fantastic imagery. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 6/3/2019 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Susan)
Date: 6/2/2019 12:18:00 PM
Like the devil, he doesn’t admit the truth. Nicely done!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 6/3/2019 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. You're right: minions are all the same)