Mohamed Omar Poet Rhyme

I Did What I Did

I ran thousands of miles.
                                                    Created endless happy smiles .
                                                       Painted skies .
                                                          For their eyes.
                                                            Sweetened the sea .
                                                           For them to be .
                                                        Dived into dark oceans .
                                                     To give pleasant emotions .
                                                   I breathed in what they breathed out .
                                                 Changing my truth to doubt .
                                               I did what I did and I do.
                                             For he, she and you .



31st Aug 2021

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Mulu Magdalinos September 14, 2021 at 6:11 AM Thank you for you comments on my poetry and congratulations for your poetry!!

Elaine George September 7, 2021 at 12:16 AM Much to ponder here, Mohamed. Mohamed Omar September 8, 2021 at 1:30 AM Absolutely right. Thanks love

Valentin Savin September 2, 2021 at 7:11 AM I have no doubt, dear Mohamed, that you are not only a talented poet, but also a great person who is always ready to help everyone and everything around you. Mohamed Omar September 2, 2021 at 7:23 AM I am so touched by your sweet poetic words.I am honored to be called a poet by you .Thank you above and beyond.

Beata Agustin September 1, 2021 at 3:57 PM Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Mohamed Omar September 1, 2021 at 9:56 PM Thank you I am blessed with your words. Bless you

Kelly Hitchcock September 1, 2021 at 1:29 PM The shape and the words...perfect! Mohamed Omar September 1, 2021 at 9:56 PM Thank you brave poet.

Regina Mcintosh September 1, 2021 at 10:30 AM Lovely. God bless you always, Love, Gina Mohamed Omar September 1, 2021 at 11:33 AM I am really honored by your words . Love and Bless you abundantly .

Mystic Rose Rose September 1, 2021 at 9:28 AM Ah, sweet, I love the way you take opportunity and make it count, Well done dear poet. :) Mohamed Omar September 1, 2021 at 9:59 AM Thank you so much for your sweet words .Glad you liked it.

Unseeking Seeker September 1, 2021 at 12:04 AM Beautiful words and geometry! Mohamed Omar September 1, 2021 at 12:09 AM Thank you ,honored by your words .

Heidi Sands August 31, 2021 at 1:32 PM Well done! I hope ll is well :) Mohamed Omar August 31, 2021 at 1:34 PM Thank you for your words.

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2021 at 1:13 PM How lovely this is, in message and format Mohamed Omar August 31, 2021 at 1:16 PM Your comment is a poem . You are a beautiful poetess.

Darlene De Beaulieu August 31, 2021 at 11:40 AM Hello Mohamed Omar, yes you did what you had to do. A lovely poem. blessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu September 1, 2021 at 11:34 AM Hello Mohamed Omar, this makes me happy . Yes I enjoyed your poem. Blessings my friend in abundance. Mohamed Omar August 31, 2021 at 1:09 PM I am honored by your words . So glad you liked it . Blessings in abundance .

James Marshall Goff August 31, 2021 at 9:43 AM I understand this freedom, Mohamed, life is meant to be lived, good work! Mohamed Omar August 31, 2021 at 11:12 AM Appreciated over and beyond .Thanks