I Did It My Way

His shabby house sat on my street, and he
was like that run-down house - unwashed; unkempt.
So Barklay, with his slick black hair, would be
our school yard’s crow, one pecked at with contempt.

Another on my street was also jeered.
Poor Janno, homely girl with eyes that crossed.
The birds that mocked declared that she was weird;
though smart, she had a sparrow’s wings less glossed

And vaguely I recall the taunting words
that followed Janno and the gawky crow.
And not among the flock of strutting birds,
I could conceive an inkling of their woe.

Befriending rare birds, I did it my way.
I'd walk them home, for I don't shun a stray!

June 15, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/13/2014 12:15:00 AM
Nice one Andrea. I did a few comments tonight but am tired so heading to bed. Hear hubby snoring . love phyl
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Date: 6/26/2014 11:25:00 PM
No surprise that this one is a winner Andrea. When one shows compassion for those who suffer the jeers from school mates, they are a true blessing on earth. A very beautiful (familiar) poem. I love. Congratulations on your win Andrea.
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Date: 6/25/2014 4:56:00 PM
loved the way you compared your friends to birds here
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Date: 6/23/2014 4:29:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2014 12:37:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win!!!!
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Date: 6/22/2014 9:14:00 AM
Ah, cruel nature. LOve, Dave
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Date: 6/21/2014 10:50:00 PM
Hi Andrea,, Congratulations, on your win..... Love SKAT
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Date: 6/21/2014 10:13:00 PM
Congrats Andrea...PD
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Date: 6/21/2014 8:22:00 PM
Well penned Andrea...congrats on your win
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Date: 6/21/2014 5:19:00 PM
Love the unique take on this one, Andrea! Your kindness has been repaid and once again we see you standing on a winning podium! Congratulations:) // paul
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Date: 6/21/2014 4:34:00 PM
gracious heart you have, andie; beautiful!... kudos to you for a shining win!.. huggs
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Date: 6/21/2014 3:55:00 PM
I loved this the first time I read it - a worthy winner! Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 6/21/2014 2:36:00 PM
Andrea u r best at sonnets ! Love ur winning ways ,, congrats !
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Date: 6/21/2014 2:13:00 PM
Hi Andrea, my friend, please accept my congratulations on another big win for doing it your way! That's the only way to go!!!
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Date: 6/21/2014 1:45:00 PM
I remember this poem well, Andrea, and am so pleased to see you in the winners' circle. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/21/2014 12:17:00 PM
Stopping back with congratulations.... Hugs
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Date: 6/21/2014 11:03:00 AM
Kind hearted and good character you portray here..:) Kudos Andrea..:)! Happy weekend!
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Date: 6/21/2014 10:06:00 AM
A nice win, Andrea,Congratulations. Mohan
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Date: 6/21/2014 8:29:00 AM
so kind hearted Andrea lovely poem congrats on 3rd place on my very short list and for entering hugs
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Date: 6/21/2014 7:21:00 AM
Good job, great tale, rare birds, rare people are a treasure to have, Grats on your medal, :) hugs
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Date: 6/20/2014 3:56:00 PM
Andrea! Love your liking people to birds.. crazy good penning my friend!.. Stars in your crown for befriending them!!.. Hugs.. Arlene.
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Date: 6/20/2014 1:46:00 PM
They say that Jesus was a shepard of the weird too Andrea, you're in good company. I like red winged black birds. This is a marvelous parable. " Though smart, she had a sparrow's wings less glossed..." double WOW! J.A.B.
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Date: 6/20/2014 8:31:00 AM
A truly great sonnet my friend. I also always defended those less fortunate. Of my many fights as a young man( a club bouncer) and in my private life great majority were me defending others. I paid a hefty price too but gave and now give no complaints. Beautiful poem and beautiful courageous action on your part. BBBBBBBravoooooooooo!!!!
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Date: 6/19/2014 6:42:00 PM
I love this...the poem and what you did. I also like that you took this turn on the contest. I always shy away from "my way"... sounds like we do not need the help of others and God. This is beautiful.
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Date: 6/19/2014 4:16:00 PM
bravo to you, andrea, both for your very caring actions and for this amazing poem describing them!
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