I Did It My Way

His shabby house sat on my street, and he
was like that run-down house - unwashed; unkempt.
So Barklay, with his slick black hair, would be
our school yard’s crow, one pecked at with contempt.

Another on my street was also jeered.
Poor Janno, homely girl with eyes that crossed.
The birds that mocked declared that she was weird;
though smart, she had a sparrow’s wings less glossed

And vaguely I recall the taunting words
that followed Janno and the gawky crow.
And not among the flock of strutting birds,
I could conceive an inkling of their woe.

Befriending rare birds, I did it my way.
I'd walk them home, for I don't shun a stray!

June 15, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Babcock Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:15 AM
Nice one Andrea. I did a few comments tonight but am tired so heading to bed. Hear hubby snoring . love phyl
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 11:25 PM
No surprise that this one is a winner Andrea. When one shows compassion for those who suffer the jeers from school mates, they are a true blessing on earth. A very beautiful (familiar) poem. I love. Congratulations on your win Andrea.
Horne Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:56 PM
loved the way you compared your friends to birds here
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 4:29 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Lindley Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Congrats on a fine win!!!!
Austin Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Ah, cruel nature. LOve, Dave
A  Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Hi Andrea,, Congratulations, on your win..... Love SKAT
A   Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Congrats Andrea...PD
May Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 8:22 PM
Well penned Andrea...congrats on your win
Callus Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Love the unique take on this one, Andrea! Your kindness has been repaid and once again we see you standing on a winning podium! Congratulations:) // paul
Onclaud Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 4:34 PM
gracious heart you have, andie; beautiful!... kudos to you for a shining win!.. huggs
Allison Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 3:55 PM
I loved this the first time I read it - a worthy winner! Hugs Jan xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Andrea u r best at sonnets ! Love ur winning ways ,, congrats !
Sietesantos Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Hi Andrea, my friend, please accept my congratulations on another big win for doing it your way! That's the only way to go!!!
Devonshire Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 1:45 PM
I remember this poem well, Andrea, and am so pleased to see you in the winners' circle. Congratulations!
Smith Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Stopping back with congratulations.... Hugs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 11:03 AM
Kind hearted and good character you portray here..:) Kudos Andrea..:)! Happy weekend!
Chutani Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 10:06 AM
A nice win, Andrea,Congratulations. Mohan
Hamilton Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 8:29 AM
so kind hearted Andrea lovely poem congrats on 3rd place on my very short list and for entering hugs
Nance Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Good job, great tale, rare birds, rare people are a treasure to have, Grats on your medal, :) hugs
Smith Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Andrea! Love your liking people to birds.. crazy good penning my friend!.. Stars in your crown for befriending them!!.. Hugs.. Arlene.
Bordner Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:46 PM
They say that Jesus was a shepard of the weird too Andrea, you're in good company. I like red winged black birds. This is a marvelous parable. " Though smart, she had a sparrow's wings less glossed..." double WOW! J.A.B.
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 8:31 AM
A truly great sonnet my friend. I also always defended those less fortunate. Of my many fights as a young man( a club bouncer) and in my private life great majority were me defending others. I paid a hefty price too but gave and now give no complaints. Beautiful poem and beautiful courageous action on your part. BBBBBBBravoooooooooo!!!!
Gibson Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 6:42 PM
I love this...the poem and what you did. I also like that you took this turn on the contest. I always shy away from "my way"... sounds like we do not need the help of others and God. This is beautiful.
Bauer Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 4:16 PM
bravo to you, andrea, both for your very caring actions and for this amazing poem describing them!
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