I Did It My Way

Yes ,my essence turned into lit passion, as I tenderly brushed my doubts at night to hold unto truth and slay my dragons; a gang war between bold cliques, so contrite. When I rejected the Junior league’s pleading my batch-mates scorned, hissed at me with disgrace; alone, they ousted me from our circle’s ring that losing dear friends tore my peaceful space. Yet, in conscience, self’s boundaries I kept Till smiles pealed to rise above youth’s trial, And the old pack beckoned, gaining its respect To learn that fury was one bitter gall.
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~ Teens involved in gang activity is higher than 772,500.If your teenager is involved with a gang, chances are that he or she is also involved in violence. From teenhelp.com ........................ Shadow Hamilton's I Did It My Way Contest 6/18/2014
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Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Lindley Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Congrats on a fine win!!!!
A  Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Nette, Congratulations, on your win..... Love SKAT
A   Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Nice win ...PD
May Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Congrats on your win Nette...
Callus Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 5:29 PM
Creative angle to this theme, Nette. Being outlawed/out-casted because of taking a stand is brave yet commendable. Good for you!! Congrats on a merited win. // paul
Allison Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 3:57 PM
popping back with my congratulations - a well deserved win. Hugs Jan xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 2:50 PM
Nette a very lovely creative ! Perfectly u cud do it ur own way ,, great words n a wonderful message out there too ,, congrats on huge win !
Sietesantos Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Hi Nette, please accept my congratulations for a big win. Wonderful write which I thoroughly enjoyed! Warmest regards!
Devonshire Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 1:48 PM
So glad you did not succumb to pear pressure to join a gang. You might be here today if you had, Nette. This poem carries a powerful message. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Excellent poem in the contest. Glad to see it on the winners list, Nette. Congratulations.
Smith Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 12:21 PM
Stopping back with a congratulatory hug
Chutani Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 10:10 AM
nice take on the theme and congrats nette for a wonderful win. Mohan
Hamilton Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 8:34 AM
well stated Nette a strong poem on a heart breaking subject congrats on placing 3rd and for your support hugs
Nance Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Oh what a message, sometimes it is a struggle to make it through the teen years, and to have that gang pressure, dang, hey grats on third for shadows contest, as always Nette you are amazing :)
Jones Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Very heart touching dear nett....leaving lasting pictures on the heart...
Smith Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Sometimes it is hard to break away from the pack,,,especially at a young age when we are looking for social acceptance ....beautifully written...hugs Tim
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 3:41 PM
gosh, so you were once in a gang, Nette?? that is so hard to imagine. excellent take on the contest theme. I have one I want to post, if I can just get around to it. Sill at work and wanting to GET HOME!!!
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June 18, 2014 at 1:03 PM
- Wise choice of topics, dear Nette - Teens Involved in walking activity is higher than 772,500 ...... really high numbers!!! Wooooow!! - Good luck in the contest!! - Have a super Thursday! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 12:32 PM
This is a winner Nette - such a difficult subject tackled so sensitively. Hugs as ever jan xxxx
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