I Cry

Before the mid of night as stars are weeping I fly, To the hidden valley we loved, where my heart beat warmed Your eyes, Believing your spirit could appear from the regions Of air, And revisit past moments of our tender love, hoping you come To me there, And you say memories of our love are forever in heaven. I shall sing love songs; we so treasured and loved To hear, Believing our voices are together like distant thunder To ear, Together, in hidden valley we loved, it’s your voice I fly, To answer memories of our tender love I cry

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/8/2016 7:59:00 AM

Congrats Roy, for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)

Skat A

Date: 7/16/2016 4:14:00 PM

Roy,,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Roy Willetts
Date: 8/25/2016 10:02:00 PM

Thank you very much

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 10:02:00 AM

Roy,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Roy Willetts
Date: 8/25/2016 10:11:00 PM

Thank you for all the Info. I am only a beginner, however I do love to dream and write. I would very much love to one day express what I have in my heart and mind in such a way, it reachs within the reader so they will share what I desire to express. Thank you again.

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/16/2016 4:09:00 AM

A nice poem ...

Roy Willetts
Date: 8/25/2016 10:11:00 PM

Thank you