I Cried a Cry of a Weeping Sound

I CRIED A CRY OF A WEEPING SOUND  NOT JUST FROM THE OUTSIDE BUT A DEEP PAIN 
FROM WITHIN WANTING OUT LETTING GO THE HURT PAIN IM FEELING 
THIS FEEL I HAVE IS STRONG NO ONE KNOWS WHAT IM THINKING I HIDE IT FOR REASONS 
BUT THE PAIN WONT GO AWAY NO ONE KNOWS THE FACTS PEOPLE JUST PICTURE HOW IT 
SHOULD BE. NOT WHAT IT IS ALREADY IN REALITY . I CRIED A CRY OF A WEEPING SOUND 
NOT JUST FROM THE OUTSIDE BUT A DEEP PAIN FROM WITHIN WANTING OUT LETTING THE 
PAIN IM FEELING THE PAIN IS SO STRONG IT FEELS LIKE MY HEAD IS ABOUT TO EXPLODE. 
TRYING TO ESCAPE ANXIETY  EVEN THOUGH I KNOW IT HAS NO WERE TO GO IT STAYS 
TRAPED INSIDE. I CRIED A CRY OF A WEEPING SOUND NOT JUST FROM THE OUTSIDE BUT 
A DEEP PAIN FROM WITHIN. WANTING OUT LETTING THE HURT AND PAIN IM FEELING THIS 
FEELING IS SO STRONG NO ONE KNOWS WHAT IM THINKING. I CRIED A CRY OF A 
WEEPING SOUND
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Agustin Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 12:59 AM
Thanks for sharing this. May I share with you God's love, expressed in John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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February 18, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Christy, deep poem, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 5, 2015 at 6:18 PM
Christy, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Torres Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 8:39 AM
Christy It reminds me of a time I went to the dentist. You really know how to convey a message. Very strong and effective poem. Nice work blessings Michael
Romero Avatar
October 2, 2008 at 10:46 AM
to sceam with out being heard or to cry with out sound is always a great write tears on paper. keep on writing on.
Anish Avatar
September 30, 2008 at 8:55 PM
Well, I have been ill recently and felt almost like weeping. Keep it up and Happy New Year!
Anos Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 9:19 PM
It is SAD but something cathartic! As if all the pain is finally pouring out after a long time!!! Be strong
Spence Sr Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 1:26 PM
Christy this is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and how the theme of the poem is reinforced by repetition. The imagery is one showing a reflection of pain and the desire for instilling of inner peace and happiness. I pray for the same. My visit to Israel was a wonderful one. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
Sandlin Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 12:21 PM
THIS POEM IS FOR PEOPLE WHO FEEL A CERTAIN WAY AND "GOD" IS THE ONLY WAY TO THE SUNNY RAIMBOW OF HAPPINESS. FOR ALL YOU CHRISTIANS PLEASE BE ENCOURAGED. LOVE CHRISTY [email protected]
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