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I Cried

Tonight tears hewed
Flowing into a vaso of wine
Over rainbows
Dreams get lost
Lovers fade
True friends rare
 I miss the ones
Who traveled far
Crawling
Out from crowds
White rose's of mystery
Alone my smile hides
Lost desires
If only
A tear could be shared
Between two

Copyright © Arthur Vaso | Year Posted 2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/3/2018 3:02:00 PM Hello Arthur,I do not think tears can be shared by two. A question: What magazine did you submit your poem? How did you do it? Two questions: have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 5/5/2018 2:42:00 AM I am not sure the question, as I just posted this poem here!!!! will soup mail you!

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/3/2018 8:46:00 PM Hello Arthur, two of my friends have passed, and I do miss them. They were my dearest friends. have a nce evening my friend. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 5/5/2018 2:41:00 AM Its terrible to lose anyone, never mind close friends, I feel for you! Hugs!

Jean Murray Date: 2/17/2018 2:13:00 PM Like a howl of despair. Login to Reply

Carole Duet Date: 2/5/2018 3:08:00 AM Lovely and sad. Yes, sometimes we need to share our tears and fears. A great write, Arthur. Login to Reply

Sara Ella Date: 2/4/2018 5:35:00 PM A tear to share- great poem Art :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/4/2018 2:17:00 AM I shed a tear reading your sad sad lines Arthur:-( Got to agree with you you are 'great' :-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/3/2018 5:25:00 PM Flowing into a Vaso of wine.. true friends are rare , always a shoulder to cry on .. I'm here .. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 2/3/2018 11:14:00 AM i find that dreams rarely come true and hopefully the loved ones we miss are at peace. Stirring write, Arthur. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/3/2018 6:56:00 AM - Heartbreaking, Arthur :( - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 2/3/2018 5:07:00 AM " If only...A tear could be shared Between two " A great line...All the best Arthur Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 5/5/2018 2:40:00 AM Thank you very much my friend!