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I am GREAT

Tonight tears hewed
Flowing into a vaso of wine
Over rainbows
Dreams get lost
Lovers fade
True friends rare
 I miss the ones
Who traveled far
Crawling
Out from crowds
White rose's of mystery
Alone my smile hides
Lost desires
If only
A tear could be shared
Between two

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/3/2018 3:02:00 PM
Hello Arthur,I do not think tears can be shared by two. A question: What magazine did you submit your poem? How did you do it? Two questions: have a nice day my friend.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2018 2:42:00 AM
I am not sure the question, as I just posted this poem here!!!! will soup mail you!
Date: 3/3/2018 8:46:00 PM
Hello Arthur, two of my friends have passed, and I do miss them. They were my dearest friends. have a nce evening my friend.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2018 2:41:00 AM
Its terrible to lose anyone, never mind close friends, I feel for you! Hugs!
Date: 2/17/2018 2:13:00 PM
Like a howl of despair.
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Date: 2/5/2018 3:08:00 AM
Lovely and sad. Yes, sometimes we need to share our tears and fears. A great write, Arthur.
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Date: 2/4/2018 5:35:00 PM
A tear to share- great poem Art :)
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Date: 2/4/2018 2:17:00 AM
I shed a tear reading your sad sad lines Arthur:-( Got to agree with you you are 'great' :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2018 5:25:00 PM
Flowing into a Vaso of wine.. true friends are rare , always a shoulder to cry on .. I'm here .. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/3/2018 11:14:00 AM
i find that dreams rarely come true and hopefully the loved ones we miss are at peace. Stirring write, Arthur.
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Date: 2/3/2018 6:56:00 AM
- Heartbreaking, Arthur :( - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/3/2018 5:07:00 AM
" If only...A tear could be shared Between two " A great line...All the best Arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2018 2:40:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend!

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