Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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I am GREAT

I Cried

Tonight tears hewed
Flowing into a vaso of wine
Over rainbows
Dreams get lost
Lovers fade
True friends rare
 I miss the ones
Who traveled far
Crawling
Out from crowds
White rose's of mystery
Alone my smile hides
Lost desires
If only
A tear could be shared
Between two

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Darlene De Beaulieu May 3, 2018 at 3:02 PM Hello Arthur,I do not think tears can be shared by two. A question: What magazine did you submit your poem? How did you do it? Two questions: have a nice day my friend. Arthur Vaso May 5, 2018 at 2:42 AM I am not sure the question, as I just posted this poem here!!!! will soup mail you!

Darlene De Beaulieu March 3, 2018 at 8:46 PM Hello Arthur, two of my friends have passed, and I do miss them. They were my dearest friends. have a nce evening my friend. Arthur Vaso May 5, 2018 at 2:41 AM Its terrible to lose anyone, never mind close friends, I feel for you! Hugs!

Jean Murray February 17, 2018 at 2:13 PM Like a howl of despair.

Carole Duet February 5, 2018 at 3:08 AM Lovely and sad. Yes, sometimes we need to share our tears and fears. A great write, Arthur.

Sara Ella February 4, 2018 at 5:35 PM A tear to share- great poem Art :)

Jan Allison February 4, 2018 at 2:17 AM I shed a tear reading your sad sad lines Arthur:-( Got to agree with you you are 'great' :-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper February 3, 2018 at 5:25 PM Flowing into a Vaso of wine.. true friends are rare , always a shoulder to cry on .. I'm here .. Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 11:14 AM i find that dreams rarely come true and hopefully the loved ones we miss are at peace. Stirring write, Arthur.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2018 at 6:56 AM - Heartbreaking, Arthur :( - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael February 3, 2018 at 5:07 AM " If only...A tear could be shared Between two " A great line...All the best Arthur Arthur Vaso May 5, 2018 at 2:40 AM Thank you very much my friend!