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I Crave For You

I can see you craving... craving for my love. Wish we were not apart, Not so far all above. I longed to meet you then, But you never bothered, Today I find you sitting besides, With all your dreams smothered You knew I loved roses, but never got me one. Today you’ve brought a bunch, But I can keep none. I thought you have no emotions, you would although be brave. You proved me wrong today, when I see you crying on my grave. I can see you craving... Craving for my love, I wish you could see me craving... Craving for you my love

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Audrey Haick

Date: 1/21/2011 4:47:00 PM

Beautiful work, Caroline! Have a good weekend. Always, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2011 9:38:00 AM

wow, this is so fine, Caroline, The emotion you portray here and the way you did it with the lines about the roses. Love that last stanza. Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/21/2011 8:26:00 AM

The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Caroline. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/21/2011 4:39:00 AM

The craving is on both the sides and it's a good sign of tested love, nice write, Caroline