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I Couldn'T Think of a Title

somehow I'm falling for you
i cant afford to be broken again
its the small things you do
the way you look out the window when its raining
i love they way you get excited over new books
i think you have the sweetest face
i don't know how acceptable its going to be
I'm a little scared to take a risk
last time i did
it didn't go so well
but you make me feel so sure
maybe ill take that risk
not today 
but i will

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/11/2021 11:41:00 AM

I love your poem, sum time, but I did notice you need to proofread more carefully. "its" should be "it's" and you need an apostrophe in "cant." I hope you don't mind my pointing out these things. In any case, nice work!

Sum Time
Date: 8/4/2021 3:33:00 PM

thank you for the feed back! i appreciate the way you deliver criticism, it helps when people are kind about it