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I Couldn'T Help You

I couldn't help you, crying in your shadows, I couldn't reach you, walled in distant canyons, nighthawks soar in grey moonlight, eyeless blind to inner sight, I couldn't hear you, shouts lost in wind, I couldn't see you, swallowed by faceless crowds, can love be there for hearts alone, soft music drown that desperate moan? I will wait here, silent on our hill, I will hope here, face turned up and to the west, if courage pays the mortal's toll, will fates reward the patient soul?

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Date: 12/4/2017 7:54:00 AM
Beautiful pen :)
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Andrew Foreman
Date: 12/4/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen

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