I Could Watch You

I could watch you 
Watching paint dry
And smile and know 
No matter what you 
Do, you make me flutter
Through and through

I could watch you
Watch the birds fly
And soar up in the sky
No cloud can hide
My admiration high
As vast as endless perfect
Blue; I can see in you

I could watch you fall asleep
Watch your dreams so loving
Deep; the slightest flicker
In your eye and softest smile
And with it tender
Thoughts are brought to
Head and then into my mind

I can watch you all the time
And never ever want or go
You fill my soul with everything 
That a soul would ever want to know
I could watch you through and through
And forever want to be with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 12:46 PM
I'm glad I found this one of yours. I love when you write this kind of poetry. so clear and so charming. Luv, andrea
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March 27, 2010 at 4:50 AM
very romantic poem, I think I fell in love...for loves sake;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Now this is a love poem to be savored! Beautiful writing David, just Beautiful! Love, Connie
Owens Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 8:40 AM
This is a beautiful poem...love it...Marty
Fringe Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 5:31 PM
David, unbelievably beautiful poem here. Inspiring. David Bissett
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today David. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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March 9, 2010 at 9:23 AM
passionate and another word would be romantic-beautiful-Charma.
Omaidin Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 7:26 AM
A truly beautiful piece of work, tremendous love poem, great rhymiong scheme, a poem to read over and over. Regardds: Déirdre
Arteaga Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 10:27 PM
very lovely
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March 8, 2010 at 8:44 PM
Sweet and lovely and infiltrated with soft passion.. your flow completely flow one into another and I like the way the end word goes into the next line in each verse.. hope my "hottie" poems gave u some inspiration tonight... I have a terrific subject ..also taboo... but he is my king right now for now unless he gets on the ball and moves a little faster..haha..thankxxx hope u liked the use of your narcotic word incorporated and dedication acknowledging your inspiration .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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March 8, 2010 at 8:07 PM
That is a beautiful write, David. Does she know? Or is this a secret love for someone? I hope your dream come true some day. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
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