I could not think of a title, but these are my thoughts

gravity is weak
or at least it weakens when it comes to me (I think)
I would anticipate my body being in some sort of free fall
but yet here I am completed grounded
it's a little disappointing
but here I am 
at the sight of his porcelain skin, cold
trying to navigate through a crowd of complete strangers
to feel this lifeless body
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Daniels Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 7:30 PM
This is a very interesting way to describe lost love, Chante. It sounds similar to an out of body experience. ThkU for posting. Have a beautiful day, Ghairo.
Reeves Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:51 PM
thanks!
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