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I Committed a Poem

Caught in the act, Of my emotions put to pen. My heart spills onto the paper, Revealing a hidden love, That I have kept from you. I’m sorry for admitting, The desires of my heart. Destined to be liberated from within, The truth has leaked unto the page. It has been a long time, That I have fought these feelings. And I was just about to let you know, Of this truth...I have inside. But you caught me scribing, A poem for my true love. And if you read the bottom, It was scribed for you. I committed a poem, And the truth...shall set me free!

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Date: 1/15/2010 6:53:00 AM
I really like this one. I need more time to read all your poems, but thanks for your nice comment leading me here.
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:50:00 PM
What a beauty Raul,,I hope the lady in your dreams gets to Know the emotions you carry for Her..Commitement is a commitement wherever it is.. when One believes in it..Original work Raul,Sweet indeed..Charma
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:27:00 AM
Nothing could be more romantic!! She is so lucky to be adorned with your beautiful words in a poem! :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:06:00 AM
Interesting thoughts and ideas in this one. Sara
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:03:00 AM
Very clever write. Best of luck in love.
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Date: 1/1/2010 11:41:00 PM
Cool poem, Raul. Love the style here. Andrea
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Date: 1/1/2010 11:37:00 PM
Guilty as charged! Good write.
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