I Committed a Poem

Caught in the act,
Of my emotions put to pen.
My heart spills onto the paper,
Revealing a hidden love,
That I have kept from you.

I’m sorry for admitting,
The desires of my heart.
Destined to be liberated from within,
The truth has leaked unto the page.

It has been a long time,
That I have fought these feelings.
And I was just about to let you know,
Of this truth...I have inside.

But you caught me scribing,
A poem for my true love.
And if you read the bottom,
It was scribed for you.

I committed a poem,
And the truth...shall set me free!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dabomb™ Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 6:53 AM
I really like this one. I need more time to read all your poems, but thanks for your nice comment leading me here.
Chircop Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 2:50 PM
What a beauty Raul,,I hope the lady in your dreams gets to Know the emotions you carry for Her..Commitement is a commitement wherever it is.. when One believes in it..Original work Raul,Sweet indeed..Charma
Richards Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Nothing could be more romantic!! She is so lucky to be adorned with your beautiful words in a poem! :) Love, Carrie
Kendrick Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 2:06 AM
Interesting thoughts and ideas in this one. Sara
Hilliker Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 2:03 AM
Very clever write. Best of luck in love.
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Cool poem, Raul. Love the style here. Andrea
Byrne Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 11:37 PM
Guilty as charged! Good write.
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