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I closed my eyes

Opportunity presented itself I closed my eyes Learning seemed hard I closed my eyes I pushed open a door to my new start I closed my eyes Nothing worked out I closed my eyes Facing my reality I closed my eyes Losing the worth for which I strived Every waking moment my heart cried However hard I tried I couldn't close my eyes.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/26/2024 11:01:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Anchal Rai
Date: 9/11/2024 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, I appreciate it. You made my day.