I Closed My Door Unto the World

Proud Flags of a Fool unfurled-
Fell upon Life's jagged rocks
I closed my Door unto the World,
But, alas! It has no locks!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Chan This is a uniquely creative written poem. AAAWWW you fell on sharp rocks. I fix your boo boos. LOL And buy you a lock for your door. HEE HEE Hugs Thanks for the sweet comment on my Wonderful World poem.
That Archaic Poet Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:49 AM
lol Thanks for the read, Robin <3
Anglesey Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Love this! The imagery rocks and the rhyme is impeccable, as usual :)
That Archaic Poet Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 11:53 AM
Thanks, love. I think it has a "Dickinson-esque" feel to it; well, the last 2 lines, anyways ;)
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