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I Climbed a Tree

I climbed a Tree I climbed a tree to see the world I never felt more alive I climbed a tree to see the world and see why I should live I climbed a tree to see the world and all I saw you was you I climbed a tree to see the world and it has nothing more to give I climbed a tree to see the world and then I took a dive I climbed a tree to see the world and I never felt more new I climbed a tree to see the world and now from there I hang I climbed a tree to see the world and u never came I climbed a tree to see the world and you're the one to blame

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2016 12:39:00 PM

- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Carol :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2016 1:58:00 PM

Carol, the best list ever, ,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/4/2016 9:40:00 PM

Carol Lo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Moon Flower

Date: 6/4/2016 8:29:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Carol. By the way, you may want to review the different forms of poetry particularly the one you've used in your poem now. ;)