Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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10.37pm March 13, 2025

I Choose To Dwell In The Clouds

I choose to dwell in the clouds
If that’ll boost my self-esteem aloud
No need to be showy or proud
Humility will lift me up, no mist shrouds.

Loneliness, self-pity, anxiety and depression
are far remote if I don’t pay attention
Simply focus on selfless loving and generosity
Be trustworthy always, forget about negativity.

Life is full of ups and downs
Hard to please all loved ones and friends around
Just give my best to all, without regrets and sound
And I know God’s love and blessings on me astound.

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I Am Anaya March 13, 2025 at 4:09 PM Ah! Movingly in awe of. Simplicity sometimes says it best, from the angel that you are, Len. Warmest wishes ~ Len Gasun March 17, 2025 at 6:59 PM Oh, thank you so much for your precious time reading my poem and your uplifting words my dearest poet fried Anaya. I intended to make it simple so I can impart the message clearly. Beside it was done quite rush coz I was still in the process of flu recovery that time. Tyvvvm for your loving support. God bless you always and your superb talent in poetry. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2025 at 1:30 PM - Truth in your words, Len... a beautiful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs and <3 Len Gasun March 17, 2025 at 6:57 PM Thank you so much belatedly for reading my poem, your encouraging words, best wishes my dearest poet friend Anne-Lise. Your uplifting comment is already a great prize for me . Thanks a lot for your precious time and encouragement. So much appreciated. God bless you always and your superb talent in poetry. Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 13, 2025 at 11:59 AM Dear Len, Wow, you beautifully captured the uplifting power of dwelling in the clouds. I just loved your words on humility, selflessness, and focusing on positivity. Your journey took me on a flight rising above negativity through kindness, and faith is truly inspiring. Such a heartfelt piece. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Len Gasun March 17, 2025 at 6:53 PM Thank you so much belatedly for reading my poem and for liking the simple words I used. I wrote this so simple for I was in a hurry due to my health condition (still recovering from flu that time). Now, I'm still having a lil remnant of it, an occasional cough and runny nose. Thanks a lot for your encouraging words dearest friend. God bless you always and your superb talent in poetry. Hugs