I Check Hotel Beds

Jack This is a creative, gross and eerie write. It's funny in a truthful way. Thanks for the sweet comment on my Life's Bubble poem.

ha ha ...bite bite... i hate hotels... but, i enjoy your tanka...pd

Good morning, Jack! This one is soooo creepy, I believe you could actually enter in a Halloween Poetry Contest too! Just the tho't of 'em! Grooooty! Hope you and your family are doing well. Happy autumn...fast approaching. Gwendolen

Good one Jack-I try not to think about it myself :)

Hey, you talk about a real nuisance for travelers. Since the "No bag on bed" recommendation and the "Leave your luggage in the bath" note...makes a traveler think about going bagless...lol. "BBs" are a worldwide issue the news boasts. CR

lol, witty write mate I don't have the means to travel or stay in hotels or motels so I don't have that worry, enjoyed....with love.....your mate old Jack

I guess we should all be checking the beds in hotels, Jack. At home I have a water bed so no chance of bedbugs! There does seem to be widespread concern about the BBs in the U.S. as well. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

well Jack when we travel Lysol is always our companion and we have our own bedding we bring to lay over top the hotel sheets and blankets..never sleep directly on mattresses.. learned ages ago not safe..oh..great detailed write luv..

bb's, how funny!! they are small like a bb, I imagine. What was this tanka for?? Just for fun, or was there a contest for it?

BBs are blood suckers. nice piece.

I hate those buggers! They are very hard to get rid of and when you do have them they are unpleasant! Wonderfully done Jack, Impressive work!!

Yes, that is a scary thing to think about when going on vacation..I hope that we never experience that one..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

yes....very gross!!

The more I read about bedbugs....the more I shudder and think about them, when staying at hotels/motels.....creepy crawlies.....yikes!! :)