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I Check Hotel Beds

I check hotel beds imagine them lurking there shudder at the word shorten it to just BBs the very thought makes me sweat * Bedbugs

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Robin Davis

Date: 3/9/2014 10:40:00 AM

Jack This is a creative, gross and eerie write. It's funny in a truthful way. Thanks for the sweet comment on my Life's Bubble poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2012 8:35:00 AM

ha ha ...bite bite... i hate hotels... but, i enjoy your tanka...pd

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/18/2011 6:21:00 AM

Good morning, Jack! This one is soooo creepy, I believe you could actually enter in a Halloween Poetry Contest too! Just the tho't of 'em! Grooooty! Hope you and your family are doing well. Happy autumn...fast approaching. Gwendolen

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 9/16/2011 6:10:00 PM

Good one Jack-I try not to think about it myself :)

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/16/2011 1:25:00 PM

Hey, you talk about a real nuisance for travelers. Since the "No bag on bed" recommendation and the "Leave your luggage in the bath" note...makes a traveler think about going bagless...lol. "BBs" are a worldwide issue the news boasts. CR

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 9/15/2011 5:09:00 PM

lol, witty write mate I don't have the means to travel or stay in hotels or motels so I don't have that worry, enjoyed....with love.....your mate old Jack

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2011 2:38:00 PM

I guess we should all be checking the beds in hotels, Jack. At home I have a water bed so no chance of bedbugs! There does seem to be widespread concern about the BBs in the U.S. as well. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2011 7:57:00 PM

well Jack when we travel Lysol is always our companion and we have our own bedding we bring to lay over top the hotel sheets and blankets..never sleep directly on mattresses.. learned ages ago not safe..oh..great detailed write luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2011 10:58:00 PM

bb's, how funny!! they are small like a bb, I imagine. What was this tanka for?? Just for fun, or was there a contest for it?

Wole Francis

Date: 9/13/2011 6:54:00 PM

BBs are blood suckers. nice piece.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/13/2011 6:43:00 PM

I hate those buggers! They are very hard to get rid of and when you do have them they are unpleasant! Wonderfully done Jack, Impressive work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2011 6:38:00 PM

Yes, that is a scary thing to think about when going on vacation..I hope that we never experience that one..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/13/2011 6:32:00 PM

yes....very gross!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/13/2011 5:57:00 PM

The more I read about bedbugs....the more I shudder and think about them, when staying at hotels/motels.....creepy crawlies.....yikes!! :)