I Carry Your Heart With Me

I knew when I opened my eyes,
That last night was my last night here.

I felt it in my soul, as I lay there,
Listening to the breathing next to me.

I cried in bed knowing this would be hard,
But when is love an easy thing?

I mustered just enough energy,
To get my things and leave.

Though I was crying on the inside,
I couldn’t answer why I was leaving.

I couldn’t even say goodbye,
I could only walk away.

And If I can’t have his heart,
Then no one can...


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For Nathan's, 'The Opposite Sex' Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Raul, Words expressed from a passionate heart from a sensitive soul. I am sure it will fair well in the contest. It is beautiful. Thank you for giving me 9th place in your Icy Cascade contest. Blessings, Connie
Owens Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 10:45 PM
Very nice poem Raul...I enjoyed reading tonight....Good luck in the contest...Thank you for honoring me with a win in your contest....Marty
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April 16, 2010 at 6:40 PM
it actually sounds like a girl(no offense ment!) i think this will do quite well in the contest :) good luck!------Ell
Mckenzie Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Raul~ A very deep touching piece good luck in the contest! I love it! Laura :)
Chircop Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 12:18 PM
A fav..a Winner from all i read till now..So beautiful Raul..Happy Birthday my dear friend..Charma
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 10:50 AM
I wish you the very best in Nathan's contest Raul. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Hey Raul...This is beautiul!! "For when is Love an easy thing?" So profound...This goes to my favs. today...and thank you for the honor of my placement in your sponsored contest! ...Peace, Audrey
Richards Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Heartbreaking and sensitive poem for the contest, Raul....makes me sad, with deep emotion! Love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Thank you for the valued honour to my poem in your much sought after contests Raul.Rgds Brian.Have a good weekend
Sweetheart Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Excellent entry for a contest from Nathan that I have not yet checked out but good luck with this powerful poem.. and u are right ... LUV is NEVER an easy thing... but your words are always perfect Raul... thankxxx for choosing my "Illumination" for Shards of Light as your 10th place winner... its always a joy and pleasure to enter your contests as it creates new energies to write.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner. Sara
Scripca Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 2:25 AM
Beautiful poem here, dear Raul. Good luck in the contest! Soup mail
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