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I Care


                                      I       do                               Love You
                                     I  do care                             I  do  care
                                I  really     care                        I  really   care 
                               I  do  love  you                          I  do   love   you
                              From  both  sides                       Of     my        heart   
                            Love is  expressed  xx                 Love   is     expressed
                          Just for You, my love                    Just  for You,   my  love
                        There  are  no   words   to   express   how   I    truly      feel
                       The   world  doesn't  contain   enough   paper   to   hold     all
                       Of  the  sentiment  held  in  my  heart  for  You  on  this     day 
                     I do really care about You, for You are  my  love, my one true love
                     I do  care, I do  love  you,  You  are  so  special,You made just  me
                    Life  has  issued   me  some good, some  bad, and   some  laughter
                    Through  it   all  you  held  me   and   have  grown me into maturity
                    I do care about every aspect of  your  love, you  care   about me
                     Valentine's Day is a special time to share my  thoughts of love
                        I am  so glad  that  You  chose  me years  ago to be thine
                           Joy fills my heart when I think about You and Your love
                             The sacrifice that You made for me long ago so that
                                I might live in abundance of grace and sweet love
                                   Red paints the picture of the sacrifice given
                                      A love that can't be explained in human
                                         Terms of understanding now or ever
                                            Thank  you  my  Valentine
                                               You are  truly  divine
                                                  One  of  a  kind
                                                     The  Lamb
                                                        Slain

heartsweet loveshape

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Ed Belcher

February 18, 2015 at 7:24 PM

What a beautiful and creative poem. Great job!

Kp Nunez

February 16, 2015 at 8:32 PM

Lovely write you have, and an even lovelier subject. God is love! Everyday is therefore a Valentine with the Lord. A 7! Smiles from the land of sunshine and thousand isles. :D Kim

Nathan D.

February 16, 2015 at 7:52 PM

that is super awesome heart you have made. very cool

Debbie Guzzi

February 16, 2015 at 7:19 PM

wow Sara, what a wonderful expression of your own love! Light & Love

Ken Carroll

February 16, 2015 at 6:03 PM

Splendid write Sara.. Well done!

Monterey Sirak

February 16, 2015 at 8:18 AM

Absolutely beautiful expressions of pure love.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 16, 2015 at 5:57 AM

- Skillfully shape poem with beautiful words, dear Sara - (not easy to shape) - I wish you a nice day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Dooney

February 14, 2015 at 11:59 PM

This is really cool here ! i like the shape and the way you structure it !

Ravi Sathasivam

February 14, 2015 at 10:21 PM

Excellent sentiment write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. Happy valentines day my dear Sara.

Robert Lindley

February 14, 2015 at 8:26 PM

Quite pleasantly surprised at the twist you've taken but that just makes it more of a gem in my opinion. I see you kept at the same high level, even went higher! Just gave the finished work another 7 ...

Paul Callus

February 14, 2015 at 4:36 PM

Hi Sara! Came back to read the finished poem, and I am pleasantly surprised with the twist that you have given it. Excellent!! #7 // paul

Paul Callus

February 14, 2015 at 3:05 PM

I see two special people expressing loving words to each other...echoing their deepest feelings. Well done, Sara! // paul

Robert Lindley

February 14, 2015 at 1:42 PM

Unfinished it may be but its still a real winner .. I trust that in closing it out you will continue in the same level of poetry and talent as seen thus far! A7 MY FRIEND AND JUSTLY SO...