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I Care

How do I make a difference How can I show that I care When the person you want is not really there. I know I have feelings because my eyes fill with tears I know I care for you because what I feel, I also fear. Fear the unknown just little or a lot know what I know because of what I am taught. Wish I can talk to you tell you my inner thoughts but when it comes right to it I seem to have forgot. tell me please What I can do to make a difference with me and you. All I want is a chance to prove that I am your friend to hold you and comfort you Lets not pretend We have a good friendship I think you know it Just give me the chance so I can show it. So tell me please what kind of difference I make show me you care before my heart will break.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 10:04:00 AM
What a tender entreaty, such a beautiful paean of love. Wish i was the one so entreated ... but then your reading my poem and commenting is sufficient for love. Thanks
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Date: 2/4/2010 10:07:00 AM
wow sad poem but a good one. =)
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:34:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jackie. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:06:00 PM
Heartfelt plea
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Book: Shattered Sighs