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I Care

How do I  make a difference
              How can I show that I care
              When the person you want 
                is not really there.

               
            I know I have feelings
             because my eyes fill with tears
             I know I care for you
              because what I feel, I also fear.


                Fear the unknown
                  just little or a lot
                 know what I know
                 because of what I am taught.       

               
                 Wish I can talk to you
                  tell you my inner thoughts
                   but when it comes right to it
                   I seem to have forgot.

                 
                  tell me please
                  What I can do
                   to make a difference
                   with me and you.


                   All I want is a chance to prove
                    that I am your friend
                     to hold you and comfort you
                     Lets not pretend


                  We have a good friendship
                    I think you know it
                   Just give me the chance
                    so I can show it.

                 So tell me please 
                  what kind of difference I make
                 show me you care
                  before my heart will break.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 10:04:00 AM
What a tender entreaty, such a beautiful paean of love. Wish i was the one so entreated ... but then your reading my poem and commenting is sufficient for love. Thanks
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Date: 2/4/2010 10:07:00 AM
wow sad poem but a good one. =)
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:34:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jackie. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:06:00 PM
Heartfelt plea
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