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I Cant Take This

i cant take this i can do this no longer i refuse i wont think about you i wont remember that time i wont think about how you hurt me all i will remember is my friend who hurt me because thats all you are your a friend... somewhat of a friend anyway i cant even imagine how dumb i feel you make me feel like i left myself.. left myself and went to another body when we were done...i didnt even know me thats the worst feeling ever... not even recongnizing yourself.. what does that mean?! you made me forget myself! your not going to do it again. im done. no matter what. mark my words. D.O.N.E. im done with even you. im done being the one that is wrong all the time im done letting you walk all over me im done not being me for someone that doesnt even want me the real me...not the me you made me be...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/23/2011 9:51:00 PM
What an emotive poem. It's so easy to lose yourself in another person, and then have to find yourself after they leave. So tragic.
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Date: 11/10/2011 2:33:00 PM
reminds me of being young and looking for mr right and finding mr poke and joke
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Date: 10/6/2011 6:50:00 PM
truly heart felt. and yes always be you dont change for anyone because the minute u do, thts the minute u forgot about you.... awesome poetry =)!!
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:50:00 PM
One good piece of advice that was given to me many years back was not to let a single moment in life define you...Rise above and you will see the light beyond the sadness... Hope your well and your soup mail made me smile... you are a true friend... Michael
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:43:00 AM
i really like this one liz. its amazing, just like all your other poems. thank you for sharing
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Date: 9/15/2011 7:54:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Elizabeth. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol
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