Betty Bateson Poet Couplet

I Can'T Take My Eyes Off of You

I can’t take my eyes off of you
It doesn’t matter what you do
You have a great hold on me
Making me the best I can be

I can’t take my eyes off of you 
You are in me whatever I do
My love has such a strong flow
Cupid has hit me with his arrow

I can’t take my eyes off of you
In all that I am and all that I do
You are the one to keep me up
Your power overflows my cup

I can’t take my eyes off of you
In all the things I say and do
I think about it and it is true
Now what am I supposed to do

Apr.27/14

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Faye Gibson May 8, 2014 at 3:43 PM great win, Betty...congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A May 8, 2014 at 10:11 AM Hello, Betty your poem took a great hold on me.. I much enjoyed every line, . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)

Tim Smith April 28, 2014 at 6:12 PM This is nice Betty...I love the repeating lines...hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian April 28, 2014 at 8:26 AM :) Beautiful Betty....Oh, I had the music going through my mind. You made this your own in a sweet way! Hugs!