I Cant Help Her

Sunday softly sweetly swinging,
Freely flying forward, fabulous fun,
She’s Smiling Seeing sunshine,
Happily helping her healthy heart,
Wife weeping woefully,
Cannot control constant crying,
Hideously hiding her hurt,  




Sponsor	Joseph May
Contest Name   Alliterisen
9th May 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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June 13, 2023 at 5:50 AM
Nice alliteration in this poem, and heartfelt.
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June 13, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Thank you Linda. Ahh heck this type of poem is easy, you only have a few words to choose from to make it rhyme so you dont have to think very hard.
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June 2, 2023 at 12:29 AM
This is a sad song, well written.
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June 5, 2023 at 6:50 PM
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment
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