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I Can'T Help Falcon In Love With You

severed pigeon wing
                                       at my door

                                   gift from above










(true story)

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2019

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/30/2019 11:45:00 AM A true artist dissects the bird, places it like Poe near the door. A poetic offering... Login to Reply

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 10/19/2019 3:10:00 PM Nice short poem. I see wild pigeon almost everyday at my Window. Have a good time :) true story too. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/20/2019 7:40:00 AM Thank you Abdullah. I have two old doves; when they die I do plan to get a bigger pigeon. Maybe something fancy. :))) xomo

Phatt Matt Date: 10/17/2019 11:37:00 AM Great image Brilliant pen #Matt Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/20/2019 7:37:00 AM Thank you Matt! xomo

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/16/2019 4:12:00 PM This is great, my friend -- perfectly titled and penned! Love it. Warmest wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/20/2019 7:36:00 AM Thank you my friend! I wrote the poem with my left hand, the title with my right, working on neuroplasticity ;), my left hand had it titled "signs". xomo!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/16/2019 8:58:00 AM Haha, clever play on words. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/16/2019 11:24:00 AM Tee hee ;), thank you Richard! xomo

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/15/2019 3:20:00 PM oh my! A surprising poem and I loved the word play in the title. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/16/2019 6:50:00 AM Giggles, a surprise at the door! The title made me laugh out loud when I thought of it. ;), Thank you Andrea, xomo

Chris Green Date: 10/15/2019 7:31:00 AM The poem is creepy and so cool and the title is fantastic. It had me singing the song just see if it would fit and it did. Really fun my friend. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/15/2019 7:48:00 AM Thank you thank you thank you! It was creepy (goth chick loving creepy) and COOL (falcon lover over the moon cool) ;), Hugs my friend xomo

Jeff Connelly Date: 10/15/2019 5:29:00 AM The adoration of a mile high admirer. Surely a sign from god Maureen. Login to Reply Jeff Connelly Date: 10/15/2019 8:36:00 AM I've seen many signs. I find it amazing that you were going to title it "signs". Some hurricane is forming lol. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/15/2019 7:27:00 AM For added context, this happened around the same that Chimney Swift and Peregrine Falcon were written. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/15/2019 7:22:00 AM Yup. It was called "signs" and wasn't gona be posted till this happened. I was practicing writing with my non dominant hand and decided to try writing a poem. It was a crazy time, I took it as a sign. xomo

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/15/2019 4:54:00 AM A gift you could have done without Maureen. Tom Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/15/2019 7:06:00 AM Lol! I know, anybody else opening their door to find that would have been horrified... Not a falcon lover! Even one that loves pigeons too. Hugs, my friend. xomo!

Arturo Michael Date: 10/15/2019 1:45:00 AM A butcher at best...and very hungry too Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/15/2019 7:14:00 AM Ooh, did you know there is a butcher bird? It impales it's prey (insects, lizards etc) This was undoubtably a peregrine falcon gift ;), Hugs! xomo

Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/14/2019 10:28:00 PM You could say he carried off your heart! Great poem. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/15/2019 7:15:00 AM He absolutely did ;D, Thank you Timothy! xomo

Line Gauthier Date: 10/14/2019 10:11:00 PM Fabulous title, Maureen. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/15/2019 7:07:00 AM It was called it "signs" and wasn't going to get posted till this happened ;D, Thank you Line! xomo <3