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I Can'T Help Falcon In Love With You

severed pigeon wing at my door gift from above (true story)

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/30/2019 11:45:00 AM

A true artist dissects the bird, places it like Poe near the door. A poetic offering...

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/19/2019 3:10:00 PM

Nice short poem. I see wild pigeon almost everyday at my Window. Have a good time :) true story too.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/20/2019 7:40:00 AM

Thank you Abdullah. I have two old doves; when they die I do plan to get a bigger pigeon. Maybe something fancy. :))) xomo

Phatt Matt

Date: 10/17/2019 11:37:00 AM

Great image Brilliant pen #Matt

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/20/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Matt! xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/16/2019 4:12:00 PM

This is great, my friend -- perfectly titled and penned! Love it. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/20/2019 7:36:00 AM

Thank you my friend! I wrote the poem with my left hand, the title with my right, working on neuroplasticity ;), my left hand had it titled "signs". xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/16/2019 8:58:00 AM

Haha, clever play on words.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/16/2019 11:24:00 AM

Tee hee ;), thank you Richard! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2019 3:20:00 PM

oh my! A surprising poem and I loved the word play in the title.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/16/2019 6:50:00 AM

Giggles, a surprise at the door! The title made me laugh out loud when I thought of it. ;), Thank you Andrea, xomo

Chris Green

Date: 10/15/2019 7:31:00 AM

The poem is creepy and so cool and the title is fantastic. It had me singing the song just see if it would fit and it did. Really fun my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/15/2019 7:48:00 AM

Thank you thank you thank you! It was creepy (goth chick loving creepy) and COOL (falcon lover over the moon cool) ;), Hugs my friend xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/15/2019 5:29:00 AM

The adoration of a mile high admirer. Surely a sign from god Maureen.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/15/2019 8:36:00 AM

I've seen many signs. I find it amazing that you were going to title it "signs". Some hurricane is forming lol.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/15/2019 7:27:00 AM

For added context, this happened around the same that Chimney Swift and Peregrine Falcon were written.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/15/2019 7:22:00 AM

Yup. It was called "signs" and wasn't gona be posted till this happened. I was practicing writing with my non dominant hand and decided to try writing a poem. It was a crazy time, I took it as a sign. xomo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/15/2019 4:54:00 AM

A gift you could have done without Maureen. Tom

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/15/2019 7:06:00 AM

Lol! I know, anybody else opening their door to find that would have been horrified... Not a falcon lover! Even one that loves pigeons too. Hugs, my friend. xomo!