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I Can'T Help Falcon In Love With You

severed pigeon wing
                                       at my door

                                   gift from above










(true story)

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Kim Rodrigues

October 30, 2019 at 11:45 AM

A true artist dissects the bird, places it like Poe near the door. A poetic offering...

Abdullah Alhemaidy

October 19, 2019 at 3:10 PM

Nice short poem. I see wild pigeon almost everyday at my Window. Have a good time :) true story too.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 20, 2019 at 7:40 AM

Thank you Abdullah. I have two old doves; when they die I do plan to get a bigger pigeon. Maybe something fancy. :))) xomo

Phatt Matt

October 17, 2019 at 11:37 AM

Great image Brilliant pen #Matt

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 20, 2019 at 7:37 AM

Thank you Matt! xomo

Gershon Wolf

October 16, 2019 at 4:12 PM

This is great, my friend -- perfectly titled and penned! Love it. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 20, 2019 at 7:36 AM

Thank you my friend! I wrote the poem with my left hand, the title with my right, working on neuroplasticity ;), my left hand had it titled "signs". xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

October 16, 2019 at 8:58 AM

Haha, clever play on words.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 16, 2019 at 11:24 AM

Tee hee ;), thank you Richard! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2019 at 3:20 PM

oh my! A surprising poem and I loved the word play in the title.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 16, 2019 at 6:50 AM

Giggles, a surprise at the door! The title made me laugh out loud when I thought of it. ;), Thank you Andrea, xomo

Chris Green

October 15, 2019 at 7:31 AM

The poem is creepy and so cool and the title is fantastic. It had me singing the song just see if it would fit and it did. Really fun my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 15, 2019 at 7:48 AM

Thank you thank you thank you! It was creepy (goth chick loving creepy) and COOL (falcon lover over the moon cool) ;), Hugs my friend xomo

Jeff Connelly

October 15, 2019 at 5:29 AM

The adoration of a mile high admirer. Surely a sign from god Maureen.

Jeff Connelly

October 15, 2019 at 8:36 AM

I've seen many signs. I find it amazing that you were going to title it "signs". Some hurricane is forming lol.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 15, 2019 at 7:27 AM

For added context, this happened around the same that Chimney Swift and Peregrine Falcon were written.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 15, 2019 at 7:22 AM

Yup. It was called "signs" and wasn't gona be posted till this happened. I was practicing writing with my non dominant hand and decided to try writing a poem. It was a crazy time, I took it as a sign. xomo

Tom Cunningham

October 15, 2019 at 4:54 AM

A gift you could have done without Maureen. Tom

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 15, 2019 at 7:06 AM

Lol! I know, anybody else opening their door to find that would have been horrified... Not a falcon lover! Even one that loves pigeons too. Hugs, my friend. xomo!